Not for me in this one Tim. The robin is facing the wrong way and too small in the frame with no real focus point. Your other one is a prime example of excellence and is 10 times better than this one. sorry
I love the composure but im not too sure about the processing! It looks effective and the iron work to the right of the bridge looks awesome but have you considered a Mono conversion I think it would make a fantastic image. Only my opinion were all different give it a bash mate!