I think you should have pulled back a bit more to make theBible less prominent and to put it in context with the surroundings more. This looks like a location worth revisiting as a lot of churches now are modern and have no soul (no pun intended). A little more exposure would also help. You have just the right amount of blur on the background. It is very difficult sometimes to get what you think you see to match what you actually see on the computer screen. This is a problem I find with about 90% of my own efforts.