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Mumbles lighthouse...last one!

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OK i promise this is my last one of this series!

Thanks for all the comments on my last upload, much appreciated.

Thanks for looking...........

Camera:Sony A100
Lens:sigma 10-20mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Mumbles lighthouse...last one!
Username:olbell olbell
Uploaded:22 Jan 2008 - 9:57 AM
Tags:Gower, Landscape / travel, Lighthouse, Swansea, Wales
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corinjames
22 Jan 2008 - 10:05 AM

Great composition and detail. Really like the contrast between soft fringing on the waves and the detailed texture on the rocks.

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crox
crox Junior Member 7142 forum posts
22 Jan 2008 - 10:11 AM

I love your lead in line with the rocks, the movement of the water and the composition. I find the lighthouse is a little lost in the light sky though.

Great shot.

Paul

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olbell
olbell  647 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 10:17 AM

Thanks guys. Paul I agree with you perhaps I should have had a stronger grad on. Thanks for the feedback.

Rgds Ollie

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cheesey
cheesey e2 Member 8cheesey vcard United Kingdom
22 Jan 2008 - 10:49 AM

Lovely exposure and composition.
Cheesey.

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cameracat
cameracat  108578 forum posts Norfolk Island61 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 11:41 AM

Super image, As you say a little more grad to the top.....or some PS surgery......!

Either way it's a great composition as well...!

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WelshKiwi
WelshKiwi  63231 forum posts Wales2 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 12:06 PM

I love the composition. The waters edge an the rocks are supebly captured.

I like this, and if it had a better sky it in my opinion would be a fantastic image. Im sure you could do something to bring the detail out. I dont know what but Im sure you could.

Love it.

Lee Smile

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olbell
olbell  647 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 12:17 PM

Right i have given it a go guys, let me know what you think!

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dark_lord
dark_lord Critique Team 101452 forum postsdark_lord vcard England123 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 1:00 PM

Great use of the foreground but I agree about the sky.

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geoffrey baker
geoffrey baker e2 Member 10496 forum postsgeoffrey baker vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 1:36 PM

Version 2 is good, the sky in 1 is too bright.
Geoff.

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AlanC1
AlanC1  7 England1 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 2:03 PM

Great shot and V2 I think is better.
Alan

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GalleryGirl
22 Jan 2008 - 2:09 PM

Great composition. Super images.
Marilyn x

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graeme34
graeme34  7 United Kingdom
22 Jan 2008 - 4:01 PM

Stunning image, version 2 certainly better

Graeme

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SKavanagh
SKavanagh  6312 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2008 - 4:57 PM

Excellent Shot version 2 for me
Steve

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Bodiewil
Bodiewil e2 Member 646 forum postsBodiewil vcard Wales
22 Jan 2008 - 7:14 PM

Great work, No2 for me. Great leads and comp

Dave

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Phil_Morgan
22 Jan 2008 - 7:44 PM

Number 2 for me Smile

Phil.

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ChesterT
ChesterT  6 United Kingdom
22 Jan 2008 - 9:53 PM

Top notch again Ollie. Keep them coming!

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User_Removed
23 Jan 2008 - 5:50 AM

Excellent comp and colours, V2 works for me
Mark

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Skye24Blue
23 Jan 2008 - 7:22 AM

Fantastic! Such great colours and textures.
Cheers, Mac

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crox
crox Junior Member 7142 forum posts
23 Jan 2008 - 10:23 AM

Version 2 is definatley an Improvement on an already great shot.

Paul

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vulkan
vulkan  7 United Kingdom
23 Jan 2008 - 4:49 PM

Another Nice one...Go back on a fluffy cloud daySmile

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sherlob e2 Member 82288 forum postssherlob vcard United Kingdom123 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2008 - 12:49 PM

Version 2 without a doubt - personally I always post the strongest version first. Did you use ND grads on this shot?

Adam

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olbell
olbell  647 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2008 - 4:38 PM

Adam i used an ND grad for the first shot but it was too light as you can see. The second shot is me playing with the sky in PS. Thanks, Ollie

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