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A shot looking south to Mumbles Pier. Thanks for comments on the photo yesterday, much appreciated!

Thanks for looking.....

Ollie

Camera:Sony A100
Lens:sigma 10-20mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Mumbles Pier
Username:olbell olbell
Uploaded:23 Jan 2008 - 9:58 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Mumbles, Sea, Swansea, Wales, Woer
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Term
Term (e2 Member)
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79 forum postsTerm vcard England9 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 10:03 AM
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well composed, nice lead in

Ben

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bayliner185
bayliner185 (e2 Member)
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bayliner185 vcard Northern Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 10:51 AM
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The wet rocks provide lots of excellent foreground interest and a good lead into the frame. You have also managed to keep the image sharp from the nearest rocks right through to the pier, which is important in an image like this. I would however, be tempted to replace the sky in this one Oliver, it's not really adding anything to the image. May be my eyes but is the horizon just a tad off? A few simple tweaks would add a lot to this one.

Jim

olbell
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47 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 11:00 AM
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Yeah i know the sky is a bit poor but i don't know how to relace skies! Agree about the horizon aswell, schoolboy! Cheers Jim

Rgds Ollie

geoffrey baker
geoffrey baker (e2 Member)
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495 forum postsgeoffrey baker vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 11:35 AM
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This is a good photo but as Jim said, a better sky would make it a GREAT photo.

The standard of the photos on this site is so high these days that even the tiniest detail matters so much, whereas a few years ago we seemed to be able to get away with soooo much, and I should know lol.

It's a good place to learn though, probably the best there is on the internet.

Well done.
Geoff.

olbell
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47 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 11:43 AM
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Thanks Geoff, yes i know the standard is so high but thats good, i want to get better so no better place than ePz!

Rgds Ollie

SKavanagh
23 Jan 2008 - 12:32 PM
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Excellent shot lovely composition
Steve

I love the detail and colours in the foreground rocks. If only there was a bit more action in the sky.

Great shot and composition.
James Smile

gorhug
5
England
23 Jan 2008 - 1:05 PM
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I like it, nice shot
Gordon

Another excellent image, so much detail and colours in the rocks.
The is a feature in Practical Photography, feb issue, on how to replace sky's. I know its like cheating, but with a shot like this, i think it would really make it.
Mark

Beautiful! Fab colours and composition.
Marilyn x

olbell
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47 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 3:47 PM
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Thanks mark i will look into it.

Cheers, Ollie

vulkan
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United Kingdom
23 Jan 2008 - 4:48 PM
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I knew this was yours from the thumb.
Nice work ollie

willgriffiths
willgriffiths (e2 Member)
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willgriffiths vcard Wales
23 Jan 2008 - 4:59 PM
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Excellent image lovely colours.
Will

dathersmith
dathersmith (e2 Member)
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526 forum postsdathersmith vcard England12 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 10:47 PM
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An excellent image Ollie, think I may have commented on one of yours on another site today as well. We must stop meeting like this Wink

Darren.

GillyB
GillyB (e2 Member)
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305 forum postsGillyB vcard United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2008 - 11:32 PM
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Love the perspective and foreground detail ....good work!

gill

WelshKiwi
24 Jan 2008 - 9:03 AM
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Those rocks are amazing, wonderful detail in them, ok so the sky maybe needs some work, but Im too busy looking at the rocks to really notice anyways.

Lovely Image.
Lee Smile

sherlob
sherlob (e2 Member)
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1993 forum postssherlob vcard United Kingdom116 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2008 - 12:45 PM
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Hi Ollie,

I'm not too worried about the sky on this one - the foreground and composition is strong enough to make it a good shot. It does however need straighteningas the horizon slopes down to the left - remember to use the sea as the horizon line and not the peir - I doubt they are parrallel.

Adam

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