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Another portrait from the wedding last year, this is the twin to the other little girl. She was the shy one and I have cropped the image leaving some of the pillars and the wall to try to bring accross her character.

This will be my last upload for a few days, I will catch up on Sunday.

Thanks for looking
Ann

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D MkII
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:7 Aug 2011 - 4:30 PM
Focal Length:96mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Title:Behind the lines
Username:Oliverpants Oliverpants
Uploaded:14 Mar 2012 - 8:48 AM
Tags:Girl, Portraits / people
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AnnChown
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14 Mar 2012 - 8:49 AM
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A beautiful portrait. Love the composition.
Ann

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Lillian
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Lillian vcard United Kingdom14 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 9:13 AM
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Beautifully captured Ann, with those blue eyes perfectly captured
Great portrait shot and cropping in
Lillian

gary_d
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14 Mar 2012 - 9:25 AM
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Works for me.

gary

franken
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14 Mar 2012 - 9:48 AM
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A really beautiful portrait.

Ken

her eyes have been captured so well and set off the whole image nice one

GrahamGrinGrinGrin

taggart
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14 Mar 2012 - 12:06 PM
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They will grow up to be a pretty pair-- She does look shy!

andylea
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36 forum postsandylea vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 5:52 PM
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a beautiful portrait ann top shot Wink
andy

morpheus1955
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14 Mar 2012 - 6:42 PM
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Beautiful portrait, beautifully captured.

Hugh

Richsr
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88 forum postsRichsr vcard England177 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 8:08 PM
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Like the eyes and hint of a smile in this Ann.
A couple of points for me the bright white line on the LHS need to be cropped way as it drawing the eye, your could even make it almost square be cropping the window on the rhs out too but not really necessary.
The second is the skin smoothing with is a little too plastic especially for a young girl. More noticeable when you go large
Regards Richard

Last Modified By Richsr at 14 Mar 2012 - 8:09 PM
Alvar
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France2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2012 - 9:08 PM
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A lovely portrait Ann
Alvar

Anjantoo
14 Mar 2012 - 10:27 PM
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Beautiful portrait, she has amazing eyes.
Jann
xxx

EMJAYCEE
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15 Mar 2012 - 4:43 PM
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A lovely girl - you have captured her beautifully.
Joan.

OAKEY
OAKEY (e2 Member)
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15 Mar 2012 - 8:37 PM
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A beautiful little girl Ann and very nicely captured.
Shaun

banehawi
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521 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2127 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2012 - 9:45 PM
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I really love the idea, the pose and the expression.

I do agree with Richard that theres a little too much softening. I also think the skin colour is extremely red, and the face can be exposed a little more. I would suggest cropping from the left, and a little on the right.


Ive loaded 2 mods, - both cropped, and with the skin tone and exposure adjusted. Mod2 also has a little diffuse glow applied. Brightening the face has the effect of reducing the appearance of over smoothing.


regards



Willie

Glostopcat
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16 Mar 2012 - 10:20 PM
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A charming and natural portrait of this lovely little girl, delighted to make this one a RC

raygregson
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18 Mar 2012 - 12:29 PM
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beautiful portrait ann,well taken.ray

sparrowhawk
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18 Mar 2012 - 2:37 PM
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a gem

lesliea
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25 Mar 2012 - 2:51 AM
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Beautiful image Ann well captured,
Allen, Smile

Maiwand
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27 Mar 2012 - 7:06 PM
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Delightful portrait.
Ron

dmhuynh72
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11 Apr 2012 - 10:14 PM
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That is a beautiful portrait Ann. Hope you're well.
regards
Yung

dawnmichelle
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4 Jun 2012 - 3:50 AM
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beautiful

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