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11 Oct 2006 - 7:11 AM

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joolsb (e2 Member)

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11 Oct 2006 - 7:11 AM

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I have to agree that this shot is very good indeed but being picky, I'd have to say that the models need to be separated just a little bit more. The arm and leg of the model in front cut across the model behind in a way that doesn't really work for me. Also, I'm not really sure about the slightly yellow colour-cast. The pink and black costumes definitely need to stand out more, I feel.

Like I said, it's a great shot - full of movement and brilliantly conceived - and just needs a bit of tweaking, imo.

ljesmith

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11 Oct 2006 - 10:40 AM

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Just to add another point, I think this calls out for less depth of field, if the building in the back was softer that would seperate the girls from it and make the image stronger. Lovely framing though.

MediumSizeUnavailable (e2 Member)

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1 Dec 2006 - 12:09 PM

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great stuff