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another nice image - the seperation is fine on the lower part of the hair but maybe a tad higher with the back light just to catch more of the top of her head.

were you slightly on the wider end of the lens zoom with this one johnny?

Blow me away by paola1987

this is a real feel good shot. made me smile when it opened

great image

adrian

Young woman by paola1987

lovely look again and well handled lighting

nice and simple

adrian

Valeria by paola1987

a great quirky look

adrian

Contact by johnnyboy114

great shot johnny, the crop, composition, tones and even the reflector bringing out the golds in the highlights of the hair are fantastic.

we must also congratulate the model, she also did a great job

well done both

Adrian

Warm by johnnyboy114

nice textures and the close crop works well

Adrian

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johnny

excellent work again, close behind the previous image, just a smidge down on the composition, but how small can a smidge get

Adrian

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johnny

WISH THIS WAS MINE !!!!!!!

A1 for me in colour, bloomin marvelous tones

Adrian

***** by johnnyboy114

great well lit image johnny, this guy has a great "stray cats vs "ordinary boys" look and you have captured that with a great set and light.

personally the grain effect is a little heavy on that version maybe try subduing it slightly also i am torn between the long and short crop, i think you need the portrait ratio but maybe lose a little off the bottom, to draw your emphasis towards the top.

you have managed to hold the blacks very well with apparent definition in the vest but (and this maybe my monitor) i lose a little distinction between the vest and the shadow. if you try this again a small nim light might help.. worth experimenting next time??

these points are only minor and the shot has great feel, mood and atmosphere and is the sort of image style i could see in a fashion mag

well done johnny

adrian

The Rush by johnnyboy114

johnny

loving this image.. well done. slightly more dynamic pose which i find very attractive. in this instance the amount of shadow on the cheek, for me, is spot on. i like the use of the graduated colour on the background, works very well and the "tossled hair" is great

adrian

Intensity 2 by johnnyboy114

johnny this is great, the lighting is far better on this than the previous shot (maybe i should browse them all before commenting but it wouldnt be so much fun)

the pose, straight to camera again is good, but as the model has her chin slightly down there are a few shadow casts around the cheek bones and under the chin. maybe try a small white reflector just to fill a little

i love the tones of the face and hair in this image - very pleaseing

good progression johnny

adrian

Intensity by johnnyboy114

hi johnny,

sorry i missed your uploads.. but i will do a bit of catch up

great attempt here on this shot johnny. the model has a lovely blueness to her eyes that draws you in to the intense gaze. i think the lighting is good although for this type of shot you might like to try a single soft box in the same position, the honeycomb you used is making the light a little harsh and direct. the soft box would flatter a little more. i like the crop very much and it adds to the straight on pose from your model

great shot

adrian

Purple by Rach_s

excellent image

adrian

Nosey by Rach_s

lovely image

well done

Adrian

Boots by paola1987

great image and good use of DOF, nice subject and well photographed

adrian

Suffocating by paola1987

excellent graphic image, conjouring a lot of thoughts and stories

nice work throughout

adrian