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This is a lovely shot, very serenr. Even without the boat it would be good, with the boat it is excellent I also like the little cloud on the mountain top. Ideally the boat would be a yard or 2 to the left and heading the other way, but that's not really controllable.
Some thoughts on things to try with composition and lighting:-
Overall I like this as the scene & the darkness of the image gives it a desolate, unworldly feel. I think that darkening down the light reflections in the mud compared to the previous version helps - although perhaps it is very slightly overdone as it doesn't quite match the reflections this side of the branch.
A nice calm feel to the whole thing. The best elements are the nice red/orange part of the sky and its even nicer reflection in the calm water. I agree with Tony about he good use of the diagonal. The large chumk of grass lower right is less interesting, so I think the shot could have been improved by concentrating more on the colourful areas by zooming in or cropping - or even standing on that rock lower left to increase the apparent area of the reflection.
I think you have achieved your objective very well. I like the swoop of the railing on the right, the moodiness and the balance between natural light and the street light. I think it's better as you have it with the solitary walker (in exactly the right spot by the way).
I like the vibrant colours and the the way you've caught the girl's hair at precisely the right moment in it's upward arc. I also like the apparent phantom head profile formed by the dust/smoke (the upper yellow forms the front of the phantom's hair, shading back thro' green to the girl's blue hair which forms the back of the head, you can also see a nose (yellow). The phantom's hairstyle reminds a bit of the early Bob Dylan.
Lot's of sensible comments here & some good Mods, so I won't go over the same ground again. My only comment is that I find my eye falling away towards the lighter area on the left (is it a font there?), so I would be tempted to darken the area to the left of the pulpit.
I like the light on both the big bunch grass & on the mountainside. The bunch of grass is an important part of the picture. I agee with the other comments about cropping the bottom - the cropped mods are an improvement. A nice picture
The sky has a lot of interest in it and is clearly the main interest in the image. The silhouettes of the palm trees & undergrowth take away a lot of space from the interesting sky - especially the black area at the bottom. I've uploaded a cropped version that makes the proportion of sky greater.
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