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14/04/2014 - 9:57 PM

Lord of all he surveys

Lord of all he surveysWelcome on board Rosina.

I like the fact that you present this picture in black and white. Good tones of shadow are recorded. Bravo.
My only suggestion would be to crop a bit from the space above the farmer.
Consider for a moment the current setting of the elements in the picture.
It shows land and the farmer in the bottom half and an almost empty sky on the other half.
Does this sound doing justice to the importance of the farmer in your frame?
Especially in square frames unless you shoot geometrical patterns avoid splitting your image in two parts
split it in 3 horizontal or vertical parts and place your main subject to any two superficial stripes of your frame
avoiding the very middle one.

kindly,
pablophotographer
09/03/2014 - 11:54 PM

|Fruit mix.

|Fruit mix.Hi. Personally I don't know why stacking is necessary on a pic like this but there you go, practice never harmed anyone in photography.

Regarding movement I can't see any but I have not examined the picture thoroughly. You are correct not to use image stabiliser whilst using tripod. If you sense movement and you don't own a remote shutter release mechanism, use the self-timer to allow the camera take the picture 10 seconds after you pressed the shutter, this would eliminate your involvement into camera shake. You can also lock the mirror in some models, I don't know if yours offers this feature. Everything like lens focal length, ISO, aperture, shutter speed are interrelated into getting the light and its reflectors reaching the film or the sensor of your camera, digital offers immediate result and chances to rectify things on spot.

I know you worried about movement but I think you could also pay attention in creating a ''clinical'' still. A well ironed tablecloth squared, using the markings as guiding lines and assistants in balancing your items on it, or creating perspective. A reflector positioned on the right to bounce some light from the window on the left to the far right leaves would balance the level of darkness on the wall behind. I am not sure if the feeling of the tilting to the left, superficial as it is, is because of your shooting position or your angle towards the table. Spirit levels can go on the hot-shoe of the camera to assist you on that. I would also expect to see the glass with the wine that is missing from the jar to be there.

In stills you have all the time necessary to produce perfect final images. Aim to do that.
pablophotographer
01/03/2014 - 12:06 PM

Will I ever get it right ?

Will I ever get it right ?Hi Lelah,

is this a self portrait? It is hard to be accurate in metering then... Lighting is pointing the face correctly without causing problems with shadows; what does the pose seems to represent? why is the sitter looking away from the lens? This is disengaging in most of the times and here it doesn't favour the result you wanted to get from I suspect. Try to capture some character, if it is informal portrait, have some fun make your sitter laugh rather than smile or try to generate a reaction form them which you will stay on your film or camera sensor.

pablophotographer
28/02/2014 - 3:40 PM

King of the Rut

King of the Ruthi,

the shooting angle is superb and the deer well exposed but the sky spoils it for me, it looks like an artificial addition to the shot moment.
If the clouds were to be moved as fast as this ''moooo'' call lasted I would also expect to see the grass moving too.
The light for the animal comes from the right but on the right we see a very dark vertical feature.

kindly,
pablophotographer
24/02/2014 - 1:48 AM

Zuoz, Switzerland

Zuoz, SwitzerlandHello to my friends in Switzerland Smile #

I think the trains should had arrived in the train station by 14:30, now is it the train late or the clock???
I'd take the second option as I am wearing an automatic swiss watch (but not certified as chronometer) and as far as I remember from my last visit there, the train services were punctual.

To the picture now! I like it Smile I have never seen a format as such 2:1 so I wonder is this a cropped image? A combination of two 1:1 pictures next to each other, maybe?

Exposure is tricky on the snow, you did lower it 1/3 but I think the day was cloudy or had sunny intervals, the white bell tower on the church looks white, the snow on teh roof looks white but the snow on the hill looks greyish - due to a cloud suppose.

Most of the importance of the total frame lies on the left square part - I tried a mod with only this part (on the left) and it looked nice - the extra right part adds some visual information as the horizontal line of trees up on the top right corner and a nice play of sunshine on a wall on the bottom right corner. It doesn't look like the station to me but architecture in Switzerland can amaze visitors so I might be mistaken. Another crop I did contained just the bell tower and the train, no other houses visible, it is as wide as the current frame, but less tall. as a frame it is big so it can give you various possibilities of cropping. I

I know it can reach easily minus 17 Celsius there so here is a hertzlich salut and a hot Ovaltine cup for you!
pablophotographer
24/02/2014 - 1:12 AM

Porthcawl Lighthouse

Porthcawl LighthouseHello Sue.

I understand this is a difficult picture to take and you have worked a lot on it.
I shall skip the technicalities and I shall point that because I like the height of the crashing wave being taller than the lighthouse and almost reaches the sky, I would explore a shorter version of the picture. I tried a square format , I am not sure if it is big enough, for the site specifications, to be uploaded, will try that soon.

My suggestion is to stop worrying about every other procedure, everyone here tried their best. Print it as it is on a glossy paper to maintain the wide range of shadows and to bring out the best of the resolution used. Noise will turn to ''grain'' or a surface like matte paper. Do not put a glass in front, just frame it and hang it. Job done.

pablophotographer
20/02/2014 - 5:42 AM

newborn

newbornSuch a cute baby! I'm buying it (the pic I mean). Hahaha.

Nice and eye catching. I like the angled framing. It is one of the strongest points of the picture, along withe the head band and the baby Smile

The weakest points of the picture are the cut-off of the legs and the reflection of the photographer in her eyes (if you were to enlarge this, would be even more present).

I made a mod and will try to upload it, I hope it is too big so it falls in the site's guidelines); I cut-off the picture at a point where it may be more difficult to distinguish if the white item at the bottom end is a daipers or bed-linen (hopefully). It also shows that the feet may not be a necessary part of the picture. You would still ave to do the work in here eyes though, I would have allowed someone's reflection it were her parents or just one of the parents taking the picture, creating a feeling of ''seeing themselves in her eyes'').
17/02/2014 - 9:04 PM

Lines and arcs

Lines and arcsHello!

Tricky subject, good effort though.
It is such a headache to find a line to grasp and align your camera to take such subjects... it could be the right top corner getting the plsterboard edge right in the middle? would it be the vertical of the window frame? You have obviously pointed the lens upwards, but a tiny 'tweek' on the horizontal axis between your hands (one or two degrees forward from the right) might had brought a rigid balance to the whole plot, especially if combined with the corner tip mentioned above.

Finding subjects is as important of taking pictures and this deserves a bravo!

voted
pablophotographer
13/02/2014 - 11:25 AM

village man

village manVery good for first attempt!

hello shashank, I like your picture, it suggests that the man is a shepherd I see sheep behind him. His hand gesture reminds me of resting on a shepherd's stick, but I fail to distinguish if there is such a thing which he might be holding.

When you are out and about during the day you work with the natural light from the sun, too much sunlight straight on the subject causes discomfort (but you can tell them to close their eyes and open them when you are ready to fire the shutter, people usually laugh when I tell them so, see the picture of two people laughing in my portfolio so you understand). I see that the sun was hidden above the upper left corner of the frame, judging from his turban. Dare to suggest to people to take the position that gives you the best light to work on, since this man posed for you, he must have discussed being photographed, so why not suggest him to walk to the left turn a bit to the sun and have again his herd (?) behind him.

It seems to me you are a good communicator, good people photographers do have that characteristic...

pablophotographer
11/02/2014 - 4:09 PM

Cole Scavenger

Cole ScavengerMr mmz_khan, let me remind you that a photographer with the latest Nikon gear may not be an every day occasion for the children, you somehow have entered their lives without asking them how they would feel about it. They care for their work to be done and you at the time are not buying their Coal - are you sure you were right to spell this Cole? - I think you could explain them, and print to give them the picture too.

Otherwise, use a longer lens and shoot from far away Smile

kindly,
pablophotographer
10/02/2014 - 12:38 AM

Los fotografós de Antigua.

Los fotografós de Antigua.Los tres caballeros y me!

A bit too dark?
I'd be tempted to use flash, having seen the result in the back of the camera.


Z
08/02/2014 - 2:24 PM

Triangle

Trianglehello Louise.

It is very good of you to play with natural light and explore its magic with still nature, it's a good idea to work with it and then go to artificial lighting, afterall, natural daylight illuminates your subjects with free solar energy! You are immediately ''green''!

The subject chosen here is an intriguing one, a pyramid consisting of 4 triangles and a square base. This little plastic object holds a vase with two flowers inside, ''engraved'' by laser. To most, it can work as a decorative item, or paperweight, it can also become a study object in photography, like in your case.

I would refrain from suggesting you to put it in your portfolio, as is.

Close-up photography because of the intensity of space displayed in your frame requires the photographer to be vigil of even the smallest details in the frame. here your black resting/backdrop material displays 3 spots, two white on the left at the base and the back of the pyramid and one bigger black like a not fully dried water droplet on the right base of the pyramid. You should pick these up and deal with this matter before hand but thank Gd we are at the era of digital technology and you can clone them out.

The pyramid itself had a bit of rough life too, its peak and bottom left corner have been dented, again, try your objects to be as much as near perfect for your portfolio. It's surface doesn't look polished to me, it needs to be, if you think this was a model, she would probably wear make-up wouldn't she? Preparation would give you better results than impromptu pictures, here you have lots of time to prepare and try, so use this time well.

I shall applaud your single background approach which lets us focus on the pyramid without introducing any other background edges, which would be reflected on the pyramid surface (Another idea would be to use of a soft, flexible fabric rest on a table surface and a chair to make a curvy, edge-free background).

Far too many colours of the surrounding environment are on the pyramid surface, I see red and green and a bit of yellow, be ware of the surroundings too. If the yellow was introduced by yourself wearing a yellow top, I would suggest to wer something black so you are not in the picture, unless you want that effect. Notice how the lack of light at the base of the pyramid makes the bottom surface look totally different that the black surface around the pyramid (unless this object had a felt on its bottom surface). You can do with all the colour mix by turning this to black and white, I'd reckon this would look more interesting then.

Reflections part two: your shooting angle shows four vases, with the bottom two having no flowers... tough luck? Have you tried an even higher shooting angle? I would suggest you an even lower one, almost level with the surface of the pyramid but not from the same angle where your light comes from, so your lens is not reflected on the pyramid surface. Think of it as you are in the egyptian desert walking and seeing the pyramids like small hills in front of you. You would have just one or two reflections of the vase then.

Framing aspect.... You can crop to square cause I think you are too wide on the sides and too low on the bottom now.

Hopefully you find my remarks useful, I don't mean to discourage you but to encourage you to try more and new things too.
pablophotographer
06/02/2014 - 3:07 AM

Who??

Who??It has surely lifted but it's not a take off yet. Hold the horses space-cowboy!

I like the square format and I like the contrast of lines on top with triangles and squares at the bottom. It's the in between that spoils this for me. The Bostadsbutiken and the rest of the buildings are too defined, I can even see the red light looking at me saying this is not a black and white picture.

You have such a nice foreground and middle space interest so I would keep it there with a misty/mysterious f/2.8 rather than a clear f/11. And it'd better be on a tripod. A lower ISO, slower speed, and this chap, whoever he is, would look like a ghost figure. Now we're talking.

p.s. They are already here.
pablophotographer
04/02/2014 - 1:13 AM

First jump #2

First jump #2You have produced another fine shot Carl. The muscles of the horse appear well, the rider has got a nice posture for the jump as well. Your shooting angle did not allow for the full of the tail to be in the frame but that is just a tiny issue. I might had chosen a value below f/8.0 to make the background either more blurry, but that would in effect ask for a higher firing speed. Exposure and composition look fine to me. If you decide to shoot her next time again, remember to go further back if you want.


pablophotographer
02/02/2014 - 1:31 PM

Beads of light

Beads of lightHello Louise.

I like the picture as it is framed on the right and the left and from the top. My only suggestion is to crop a very tiny bit from the bottom where some lights appear to be less defined and in a sort of dark background. Keep only in the frame the lights and the cables that appear more prominent. I hope this makes sense and it helps, will attempt to upload a modification.

pablophotographer
31/01/2014 - 12:48 AM

Brick lady with her cat.

Brick lady with her cat.Nice picture, good idea to have it shot or presented in black and white.

I think if you get rid of the top 8 rows of bricks you will be left with a fine panoramic picture Smile

kindly
pablophotographer
Circus went away but the clowns have remained...Hello Velery , long time no see!

I would crop 1/4 of the height, the blurred white background on top is just a distraction, keep the bottom green 3/4ths of the picture.

The 'clown' you call reminds me of the 'Mahna-Mahna' singer in Muppet Show

here is the video clip: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8N_tupPBtWQ

enjoy
pablophotographer
Outdoor Fashion Photography - SpeedliteHi,

I am a fan of black and white photography but it is the sheer elegance of the model's pose that drew my attention. Her feet look placed graciously on the stone surface and they could be an assignment on its own right. The lack of expression and coldness of the face might be due to the suspension from the branches, I can't blame her for that, I will only applaud her attempt to do it.

I consider the following as little imperfections of lesser importance: The wall on the right takes roughly 1/7th of the total picture width, without adding too much in it. That last vertical one seventh on the right contains a beautiful acme of the brick wall and some very bright leaves. I would leave out the half part from the right to move it over to the left and have some space between her feet and the left edge of the frame. Someone could also cut off the right brick wall completely and then the model is perfectly placed (shoulder and feet) with the same amount of space from the edges of the frame. Another issue is her cut-off right arm - but this might be due to the effort to balance(?). Another issue is the hiding of her left eye and part of her face and the final issue the overexposure of the dress details on her bust.

Yet, the overall impact still looks beautiful!
pablophotographer
20/01/2014 - 10:11 PM

Here's looking at you kid

Here's looking at you kidHello MAS,

I shall agree with Dudler, no need to use flash as it does harm the eyes of the fish and would scare both the fish and the child, I see this was shot in a well lit room as well, judging from the reflection on the fish bowl.

in addition to the crop mentioned above I shall upload another two versions I could see this being possible. It is simple post shot processing and is materialised because you manage to shot the picture, might have been done while you were looking some other photos in your camera, so in the heat of the moment you chopped a bit of the child's ear. My first version deals with the vertical wooden panel on the top of the frame - not needed and focuses on the 'eye to eye' communication between teh child and the fish, the second one contains more of the child (and the ear) and the fish.

I hope you find them equally enjoyable.
pablophotographer
20/01/2014 - 12:19 AM

nina

ninaBe kind to your models Maya, don't cut their fingers.

I would say the picture is well lit as a portrait picture. I would demand more light on the dress if this was shot for fashion purposes.

I don't mind the dark empty space, it is subtle and matches the silence of the dress.

The pose and the hairstyle remind me of the era of the silent movies. The model's look to the unknown looks like a sign of modesty.

Well done in black and white too Maya.

Bravo

pablophotographer