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It never happened, but what the heck, can't always be lucky.
Predicting a picture is important.
Being patient is important too.

Having your wish fulfilled is miracle!

Slightly cropped image because of a fire alarm button on the left, so some crop also had to happen on the right. A shot form a slightly different spot is shown on the black and white group. What puzzles me is the fact that after straighten it a bit , the tiles look right but the ceiling of the upper floor doesn't.

Due to eyesight problems, I had not noticed until now the male figure drawn in the background.

All comments welcomed. Being a simple member I don't think you could make any modifications. Until recently also I thought exif data come automatically. This is my first ever critique gallery upload so forgive any omissions. Thaaanks

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ45
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:16 Jun 2012 - 2:00 PM
Focal Length:4.7mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Waiting for a pair of heeled legs to come down the stairs
Username:pablophotographer pablophotographer
Uploaded:17 Oct 2012 - 11:14 PM
Tags:Architecture, Black & white, Digitally manipulated, Landscape / travel, Photo journalism
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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4211 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom129 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2012 - 10:51 AM

I like this image. I've straightened it a bit using the distort tool, also brightened. Lots of potential here, hope to see some good mods and comments.
Ian

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vickyf
vickyf e2 Member 9vickyf vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2012 - 10:52 AM

Love the image, love the title, love the write-up Smile

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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2012 - 2:49 PM

this a superb image with great symmetry and i think it would be better with greater contrast to almost a soot and whitewash effect. real pop art - forget the blown out highlights it leaves behind.

actually i see why you waited for legs but im unsure it would have been better for them. it would look great in a frame with a double cut white mount.

its a well seen super abstract
Phil

Last Modified By NEWMANP at 18 Oct 2012 - 2:50 PM

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2012 - 3:29 PM

Straightened out, with or without 'legs in killer heels' this would make a stunning archtectural abstarct. It does need to be exactly level and vertical to shine though.

Frank

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AndyD999
AndyD999  343 forum posts England6 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2012 - 4:49 PM

Love it! The MOD was the best way to solve the problem in the issues with it not being straight. But i love it!! Very striking!! Just my type of picture!!

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pablophotographer


Quote: This a superb image with great symmetry and i think it would be better with greater contrast to almost a soot and whitewash effect. real pop art - forget the blown out highlights it leaves behind.

Phil

The original is indeed darker; seeing the histogram too much on the left while I was cropping it I decided to Brighten it a bit.

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Quote: Straightened out, with or without 'legs in killer heels' this would make a stunning archtectural abstarct. It does need to be exactly level and vertical to shine though.

Frank

Frank. I trust your eyes work better than mine, doesn't the bottom part look straight??? I feel like the left part needs to be pushed back as a revolving door, working the other way, and the right part of the image to come to the front for the chance to be straightened. It's the third time ever I am using the Windows picture software that came with my computer (which is old) that I am playing with.

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sweetpea62 e2 Member 4sweetpea62 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2012 - 12:15 AM

A very striking image..Lin

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom872 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2012 - 8:44 PM

I really do like this. For once I don't need a person in it. Technically excellent.

Paul

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Tibetan
Tibetan  2 England
4 Dec 2012 - 9:23 AM

I have picked this shot out not to comment on technicalitiesGrin that is not my thing! I look at your photo as a whole and think what do I see!, dose this image produced by you please me! yes it dose, I see lines and shapes that echo each other just like a reflection, well done be satisfied, regards Leon. there is no such thing as perfection in my world!GrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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rambler
rambler e2 Member 6477 forum postsrambler vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jan 2013 - 11:24 PM

A strong well balanced image.

Ken. Smile

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