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Use your preferred method of sharpening two to three times on the image so it's over sharpened ( at the output size for the web ). Now use the opacity slider on the layers panels to reduce the effect of the sharpening so you get to the point where you can't see any edge halos caused by the sharpening. If you set the blend mode on the layers panel to Luminosity, only the tonal information will be sharpened and not the colour information. This will improve the look of the sharpening. It may be imperceptible at web size but it will be an improvement.
I think this needs a slight crop, some added contrast and sharpening along with cloning out some of the more intrusive rocks around the bird. I also softened the water so the bird looked sharper.
I think the composition works well as does the subject.
In the mod I got rid of as much chromatic aberration as I could using ACR ( Adobe Camera Raw ). The sky looks as if it has had areas cloned which show up as lighter streaks and patches, particularly under the nose and mouth and behind the tied up hair. To sort this out I used a mask to mask out the girl and buildings and produced a new layer with a sky blue to horizon yellow and replaced the sky.
I think the contrast could do with increasing, but only the near water and arch structure. If the contrast diminishes the further you go back into the scene then it will give the image more depth. This goes with saturation and sharpening also.
I like the photo although it may need a very slight contrast adjustment using the curves tool in Photoshop or Elements.
I think you've just missed the point of focus, which seems to be slightly behind the bird.
I think the photo lacks contrast and a real focal point. The large rock seems to be that point but it's not large enough in the image. In trying to include everything the photo's impact is reduced. If you try to compose the shot thinking 'how can I simplify the elements within the viewfinder and still get my message across', then you'll have an image with more power for the viewer.
First, straighten up the verticals as this helps to relate the architecture to the sides of the frame.
I think the point of focus should be the eyes unless you have specific reasons for it being elsewhere, i.e. the nose, to suggest the dog's great sense of smell. At the moment the focus is behind the nose and in front of the eyes so it seems you haven't been as accurate as you could have been. With such a wide aperture focusing becomes critical as the DOF is so shallow.
My first impressions are:
I think you could improve this shot by focusing the lens better at the time of shooting, or using a tripod, cable release and mirror lock-up. It seems a little soft at the moment.
I think the shot's a good'un but needs the white balance tweaking to get rid of the yellowish colour cast. If you look at an area that should be white then you can change it to look white in Photoshop.
I think this is a good portrait although the slightly harsh lighting has the effect of showing all the undulations of the face.
The composition's fine but you must know the foreground and the two figures are too dark. A slight increase in exposure would help the detail in the figures and foreground.
V2 is the best shot imo and is a really well composed image.