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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:24-70mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Focal Length:39mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.0
Aperture:f/13.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:****
Username:iainhamiltonphotography iainhamiltonphotography
Uploaded:18 Oct 2012 - 1:48 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, General, Portraits / people
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PinkK
PinkK  580 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2012 - 4:37 PM

Lovely light! Grin

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parob e2 Member 4parob vcard France72 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2012 - 5:06 PM

There is no question, you have the studio technique, it is all very appealing. You have a lovely model. Yet, something bothers me, it is the model's posture. Her body, turned as it is, seems to clash with her face. You can see what I mean by cropping just below the elbow. Here the portrait is fine. Yes, the position of the elbow is needed, but when you look closely, the shirt sticks out and the model's stomach also. Closer to the hand, see how the sleeve falls and shortens the hand (which points to the defects I noticed). To me it is a question of volume, face and black hair against the rest of the apparel. I may be too picky, you are possibly right!

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