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Shot last week at Goth Weekend in Whitby. Wondered what you would make of this? (More Goth shots to come, a lot of images shot.)

ISO400, EOS 7D with 18/125 Sigma OS at about 80mm actual. Hand held with - 2 stops compensation. About 1/60 @ f8, aperture priority.

Some dodging and burning in with a smart sharpen.

Paul

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:18/125 OS Sigma
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Art
Username:paulbroad paulbroad
Uploaded:13 Nov 2012 - 9:18 AM
Tags:Art, Flash / lighting, Gallery, Night, Shop, Whitby.
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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4211 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom129 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2012 - 11:05 AM

Paul
Firstly i didn't realise you were a Goth.
This is an interesting image as are most of yours.
I did a mod, not necessarily an improvement, just lightened the overall shadows a little. It gives more rim light to the openings, giving maybe a little more depth.
Although again, you have not said why or for what purpose you made the image, I like looking at it. i keep seeing bits and pieces.
Ian

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom852 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2012 - 11:40 AM

Not a Goth, just like to see them, or anything unusual. (Although in my coke oven days, sometimes looked like one when we had an incident!) The window looked interesting and many of my shots have library use in the back of my mind although this could be considered by some libraries to have copyright issues. The sign saying 'art' seemed relevant to the composition with everything else very black.

Paul

Last Modified By paulbroad at 13 Nov 2012 - 11:41 AM

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2012 - 3:39 PM

I like it, especially the ART on the left, and the profile of the person on the right.



Regards


Willie

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
15 Nov 2012 - 12:32 AM

I like it, very interesting. Not a common image but really strike.

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xwang
xwang  531 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2012 - 5:09 PM

That's really beautiful.. love wonderful colour and light control.

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