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Based on the last one, here's MK 2. Same data as I remember but with an added sky.

Paul

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:18-125 OS Sigma
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Guardian
Username:paulbroad paulbroad
Uploaded:24 Mar 2012 - 10:15 AM
Tags:Add., Bird, Crow, Digitally manipulated, Light, Manipulate, Sky
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shydallah
shydallah  3 Bangladesh
24 Mar 2012 - 11:05 AM

very ipressive image.well timing shoot.pro quality picture.
shydallah

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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
25 Mar 2012 - 1:57 PM

A bit too much going on here, for me; the previous one was simpler and very much stronger to my eye. The crow and lamp make a strong subject but the sky's a bit much. In fact, I think any two of the clouds, lamp and crow would be good but there doesn't seem to be enough of a relationship between the three of them for them to all live together in the frame. I'd've patched in a plain blue sky, if anything.

Also, watch out for the selection halo around the crow. As a last resort, careful work on the final image with a small clone brush at high magnification will remove that.

Dave.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2012 - 7:29 AM

I agree about the halo, but it's not a selection halo, it was already there! There is one on the earlier version too that has not been selected - probably a good reason to turn in camera sharpening off for high contrast images?

Paul

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DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2012 - 8:13 AM

I think so, yes. Or shoot raw, which turns off most automatic processing.

Dave.

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