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Another of my beach silhouettes. I seem to like shooting these. This is one of about a dozen of this chap and dog as it looked quite good and in such cases i take plenty - digital being free. Difficult to get a strong composition here, so two subjects in effect at each side of the frame?

EOS 7D with 18/250 OS Sigma at about 200mm. Manual exposure 1/2000 @ f11. ISO 200. Very bright sun although it doesn't look like it - a touch under exposed and darkened more in CS3.

Paul

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:18/250 os sigma
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Walking the Dog.
Username:paulbroad paulbroad
Uploaded:20 Feb 2012 - 8:49 AM
Tags:Dog, Man, Portraits / people, Silhouette, Walk.
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10826 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2830 Constructive Critique Points
21 Feb 2012 - 12:22 AM

Its nice, but for some reason, that tiny wave at the bottom right should go?


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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
21 Feb 2012 - 5:40 AM

It's great. I like it. The idea divided two subject into each frame is awesome. there is not something have to change i think.

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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
22 Feb 2012 - 11:21 PM

This kind of shot works really well -- lots of interesting textures from waves and sand. In this case, I think I'd crop a little from the bottom, probably removing the diagonal bit of wave in the bottom right that Willie mentions. If the reflection were stronger, it would be hard to crop any of that out but the reflection of the head is very diffuse so I don't think that extra space is adding much.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
24 Feb 2012 - 5:03 PM

Thanks for comments. agree about the wave, bottom right - never saw it until commented on, then so obvious!

paul

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