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Taken the same night as my previously uploaded image, F16 @ 30 seconds

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A100
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Jan 2011 - 9:00 PM
Focal Length:90mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Aperture:f/16.0
Shutter Speed:30sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Through the stanchions
Username:pauldavey pauldavey
Uploaded:8 Feb 2011 - 12:43 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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benlee
benlee e2 Member 446 forum postsbenlee vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2011 - 1:19 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like the repeating patterns but I can't help feel the angle of this photo could be better; perhaps something from lower to the ground and to the right. This way the repeating pillars would go from right to left taking your eye across the photo.

I think the main sticking point for me are the leaning pillars on the left and the ceiling. The white line of the water seems in the wrong place too..

Sorry to be critical but I thought I'd share my two cents as the location is quite the winner! Lastly, I would also think about a black & white conversion?

Thoughts?

Ben

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lianna
lianna e2 Member 5lianna vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2011 - 1:27 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I'm afraid I am going to agree with Ben above...

I love the repetitive lines... I think a square crop of the centre would make for a fantastic abstract... The repetition of the crisscross is superb...Like Ben I am struggling with the angle and the roof part... They keep drawing the eye away from what I feel is the important part of the image.!! A bw conversion I think could work also, However I quite like the rusted look.

I think this image has great potential... And I'd like to see a close crop Smile x x

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blondspice
blondspice e2 Member 4blondspice vcard United States7 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2011 - 2:54 PM

Superbe artistic shot. A great crop (suggested above) would make it totally perfect.

Krystal

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