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Audi A6 taken at twighlight, Canon EOS 550D 18-55mm EFS lens - ISO3200 1/50 f4.5

Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:18-55mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Audi A6
Username:PaultWebster PaultWebster
Uploaded:16 Jan 2011 - 7:41 PM
Tags:Audi a6 reflections trees twilight, Digitally manipulated, General, Transport
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jan 2011 - 8:39 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A technically competent shot, and I love the reflections.

I would suggest you get down lower for a shot like this which can make the car appear more aggressive.

Colour, exposure, are all really good.

I loaded a mod which has absolutely nothing at all to do with assisting with your shot, I just could resist showing what is possible with a god shot like this.

the basic approach was to perform perspective distortion and size distortion to make it look as if you were lower, and the rest is just atmospheric stuff.


I hope this fuels you creative juices!


regards


Willie

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PaultWebster
16 Jan 2011 - 9:08 PM

Hi Willie, many thanks, love the mod, it's time to go to play in PS :0) Got a few ideas, now to put them to the test. Kindest regards, Paul.

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DRicherby
DRicherby  6269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jan 2011 - 10:38 PM

You've done an excellent job of editing out the background but I think the foreground needs to go, too. There's rather a lot of it and it's quite messy.

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PaultWebster
16 Jan 2011 - 10:56 PM

Hi DRicherby, thank you, and I agree, this shot came from a lucky snap as it were, rather than a planned shot, and my first thoughts were to isolate the background whilst trying to bring the foreground out, although in hind sight, it needs to either go, or become the focus! but there isn't enough there for that to be realistic i think.!

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Grampy
Grampy  5507 forum posts England71 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jan 2011 - 4:22 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

What a shame that you are not quite central on the car . I would take all the background to black and light the headlamps with photoshop as well as cloning out the tax disc which detracts from the car itself .
Hope you enjoy the car .
Phill

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bobsblues
bobsblues  4 United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2012 - 11:24 PM

A well balanced shot I agree with grampy about the tax disc I probably would have cropped the the front paving out and cloned the leaves over the rest of the paving .Rob

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