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i really like this shot i did at a hair stylists, its a bit different to the norm i feel and feel i captured what was wanted but haven't had any feed back , whats wrong with it ?

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:17.0-70.0 mm f/2.8-4.0
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:20 Jul 2014 - 10:16 AM
Focal Length:52mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.9
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:-4/3
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Auto
Title:Profile
Username:PCarman PCarman
Uploaded:21 Jul 2014 - 2:06 PM
Tags:General, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Portraits / people/hair
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dudler
dudler Critique Team 11126 forum postsdudler vcard England368 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jul 2014 - 2:27 PM

I'd say the answer was "nothing" peter - you could have less space behind/more in front of the head, but I'd imagine that most hairdressers would love this as a picture of their work.

Where have you asked for feedback? I've heard from one or two people lately that just putting a shot on THAT social media site is often greeted by a storm of not-a-lot. Here, you shoudl get a little more: a lot more if you post in the Critique Gallery.

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PCarman
PCarman  2
21 Jul 2014 - 2:37 PM

yes I agree with u there . I was pretty pleased with it tbh detail is great etc and probably best shot of the lot u may have seen . in my opioion lol . since coming here iv leapt and with the same cam which goes to show . what iv got I feel is a good rapour with people and I feel it shows . and was very pleased to hear a model say to me shes got work with a photo I captured so everyone benifits . thanks john xxx

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thefoolintherain
thefoolintherain e2 Member 2thefoolintherain vcard United Kingdom
21 Jul 2014 - 9:46 PM

There's nothing wrong with it at all Pete, it's a fantastic crisp portrait. I may be being cynical but if she was topless , I am sure you would have had a lot more votes and comments..There are a lot of images to look at, some seem to stand out more than others.

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PCarman
PCarman  2
22 Jul 2014 - 7:59 AM

sadly she wouldn't but you never know Grin xx

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PCarman
PCarman  2
23 Jul 2014 - 9:39 PM

had some pretty good feed back today from all the pixs think everyone suddenly looked lol cheers guys xx

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Marty_Woodcock
Marty_Woodcock e2 Member Marty_Woodcock vcard Canada
25 Jul 2014 - 12:29 AM

There is only one thing that I can find, and I know I'm just as guilty as a lot of people who shoot portraits out their, and that is not having the model's eyes in focus. (in this case eye). Other than that, the lighting, framing and complete composition is bang on. The post processing is superb too I must add. You have my vote!

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PCarman
PCarman  2
25 Jul 2014 - 8:33 AM

its been mentioned that the ear is very pretty too , actually
a very pretty ear xxx

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