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Shot of the Glenariff Waterfall, taken during the ePhotozine Northern Ireland meet

Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:Sigma 10-20
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Glenariff Waterfall
Username:PD_BARBS PD_BARBS
Uploaded:13 Sep 2009 - 8:29 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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SueEley
SueEley e2 Member 8271 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2009 - 8:38 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The waterfall itself is nicely taken, but the sun at the top and the brightness in the foreground draw attention away from it. You could crop out or darken down the foreground and maybe you could darken the sun a little - though as you shot a jpeg there is likely to be nothing much there to work with for the centre of the sun. There are some nice colours in the starburst - maybe you could use some of them to mask part of the centre.... But, however, maybe darkening the base would make it a double subject - starburst and waterfall. I'll stop wittering now. It's much better than anything I got when I was there, I think.

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croberts
croberts  102160 forum posts Ireland8 Constructive Critique Points
13 Sep 2009 - 9:33 PM

Thats nay bad at all. I like the big starburst of sun, its a different view of a familiar scene.

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PD_BARBS
PD_BARBS  5 Ireland
14 Sep 2009 - 9:34 AM

Sue
Thanks for the comments, I have shot these in Raw, so I have some scope for adjustments. I also have some without the sun, so it may be worth processing one of these to give a different perspective. I will play around with some of your suggestions.

Chris,
Thanks, glad you like it, some more to process.

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Ganto
Ganto  8769 forum posts Ireland2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2009 - 6:53 PM

I like the pools of light in this Peter, and the sunburst.
Good to meet someone new at the weekend!
Put Doolin in yer book.

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PD_BARBS
PD_BARBS  5 Ireland
14 Sep 2009 - 8:31 PM


Quote: I like the pools of light in this Peter, and the sunburst.
Good to meet someone new at the weekend!
Put Doolin in yer book.

Thanks Pat

I really enjoyed my day, and Doolin will be in my calendar for sure.

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Goggz
Goggz  72301 forum posts Wales72 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2009 - 11:31 PM

Doh! The horizon's crooked!! Musta been the Diet Coke Wink

It was a pleasure meeting you Pete, and this is a nice shot, despite the sloping pool!
Cheers, Goggz

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PD_BARBS
PD_BARBS  5 Ireland
15 Sep 2009 - 9:28 AM


Quote: Doh! The horizon's crooked!! Musta been the Diet Coke Wink

It was a pleasure meeting you Pete, and this is a nice shot, despite the sloping pool!
Cheers, Goggz

Crap, it is too, thanks for pointing it out, need to give it a small tweak.

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rowarrior
rowarrior  64350 forum posts Scotland9 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2009 - 9:57 PM

Lovely, I have a similar shot, funny that Wink Oh well, you set the tripod holes lol

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tripodted e2 Member 930 forum poststripodted vcard Northern Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
16 Sep 2009 - 6:13 AM

Good to meet you at the meet. I like the way you have caught the sun as I think it adds something different to this much photographed scene. I agree with Pete that the horizion is a little crooked but overall I think it is a great image that just needs a slight crop to straighten it up. Well captured.
Ted

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thearmsofvenusdemilo

Hey Pete, great you could make the NI meet, now you have a little insight into how it works, so put Doolin on your diary and hone your drinking skills.......Good shot of the falls.

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PD_BARBS
PD_BARBS  5 Ireland
20 Sep 2009 - 2:35 PM

Doolin already in dairy and wifey pass granted looking forward to it already, but keep me in mind for anything in between always up for a day out.

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Mavis e2 Member 12143 forum postsMavis vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
22 Sep 2009 - 7:18 PM

Loved looking at this shot Pete, it shines out . I scrolled the sun out and it still looked a very fine , sparkling capture .


Welcome to ePHOTOzine and hope to see you at Doolin xx

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DundeePhotographics

Nice image of the waterfall but feel that there is too much camera flare from the sun.

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