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Taken in the dark with a small LED torch for light. Processed in lightroom 3. Comments and suggestions very welcome. Thanks for looking.

Brand:PENTAX Corporation
Camera:Pentax K100D Super
Lens:smc PENTAX-DA 18-55mm F3.5-5.6 AL
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:29 Jan 2011 - 9:44 PM
Focal Length:26mm
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/8sec
Exposure Comp:+1/2
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Quiet Contemplation
Username:Pelican_Art Pelican_Art
Uploaded:30 Jan 2011 - 4:24 PM
Tags:Black & white, Digitally manipulated, Portraits / people
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bfgstew
30 Jan 2011 - 4:59 PM
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I like it, the light is just about right, condusive with the mood of the shot. It could do with lifting just slightly. Also a slight crop to remove the bracelet too wouldn't go amiss, they do add a slight distraction.
On more of a personal level I find the unframed upload adds too much depth to the shot set on the black B/G, a slight white border to help hold the viewers eye on the subject may help, IMHO.

Regards

Stewart

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Quote: I like it, the light is just about right, condusive with the mood of the shot. It could do with lifting just slightly. Also a slight crop to remove the bracelet too wouldn't go amiss, they do add a slight distraction.
On more of a personal level I find the unframed upload adds too much depth to the shot set on the black B/G, a slight white border to help hold the viewers eye on the subject may help, IMHO.

Regards

Stewart

thank you for your feedback stewart. Not sure how to do borders or even if you can in lightroom (only purchased yesterday).

bfgstew
30 Jan 2011 - 5:30 PM
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I'm sure you can, will have a look later on and get back to you.

digital_boi
31 Jan 2011 - 12:16 AM
0

love it very well done the lighting is superb

I really like this, the lighting works well, i would have cloned out the bracelett and maybe lit the hands a little more but a very good shot anyways Smile
Well done Lissa
Rick.

accipiter
accipiter (e2 Member)
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accipiter vcard England49 Constructive Critique Points
31 Jan 2011 - 5:05 PM
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An excellent low light portrait but I would remove the bracelet. A

Impressive low light shot. Like a painting. Congrats!

regards
Dito

ianrobinson
ianrobinson (e2 Member)
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1057 forum postsianrobinson vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2011 - 9:42 PM
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no need for cropping a great shot however if you used a white background on epz that would show you have cropped enough to make a great imae well done.

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