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Played around with the eyes and the light in this. I used the histogram to even out the light and the adjustment brush to sharpen the eyes. This was taken quite close up so no cropping. I think maybe I should have left a little more space to the left of the frame. Comments and suggestions welcome.

There are some excellent tutorials for lightroom on the net and some knowledgeable critics on E2.

Thanks for your comments on my previous uploads. Hope you like this duo.
Thanks for looking
Lissa

Brand:PENTAX Corporation
Camera:Pentax K100D Super Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:smc PENTAX-DA 18-55mm F3.5-5.6 AL
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:7 Feb 2011 - 11:02 AM
Focal Length:55mm
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/15sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:young and thoughtful
Username:Pelican_Art Pelican_Art
Uploaded:8 Feb 2011 - 3:14 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Portraits / people
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NobbytheNobster

Hi Lissa.
I think v1 is just perfect, no need for more space to the left.
I was looking through the gallery when i spotted this thunbnail and instantly recognized her from your previous uploads and thought i bet this is one of yours?
Your photography seems to have come on leaps and bounds since you were on here
last summer! look forward to more of the same. Excellent work Smile
Best regards Ricky.

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andylea
andylea  537 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2011 - 5:09 PM

v1 for me fantastic light and tones love the eyes a cracking mono top work Wink
andy

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Pelican_Art
8 Feb 2011 - 6:20 PM

Thank you both for your comments and for continuing to checkout my work. Really appreciated.
Lissa

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DitoInacio
8 Feb 2011 - 6:23 PM

What a lovely and tender mono portrait! Beautiful. God bless
All versions for me.

regards

Dito

Last Modified By DitoInacio at 8 Feb 2011 - 6:25 PM

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barbarahirst e2 Member 6barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2011 - 6:25 PM

What a delightful looking child
I love all 3 versions but my vote today is for V2
Regards Barbs

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DaisyD50
DaisyD50  7
8 Feb 2011 - 7:26 PM

What a wonderful portrait. Is doing very well in b/w.

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gary_d
gary_d e2 Member 6538 forum postsgary_d vcard Wales13 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2011 - 8:29 PM

Three nice images but V2 gets my vote. - gary

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jonwebber  6 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2011 - 5:35 PM

V1 for me, mono works so well in this portrait.
jon

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VivienO
VivienO  4 United Kingdom
9 Feb 2011 - 10:44 PM

Fantastic portrait. Love the clarity and the wistful expression in her beautiful eyes.
Vivien

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ianrobinson
ianrobinson e2 Member 41108 forum postsianrobinson vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2011 - 12:37 PM

beautiful.

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