Hi Aidan, Welcome to epz and thanks for biting the bullet and uploading a shot on your first day.
I notice that you are a beginner and as you have asked for a critique I'll try to help.
As the others have mentioned this has a lovely tranquil feel to it and you have captured some of the atmosphere in your photo. Shooting directly into the sun is never easy and you have done well to retain detail without underexposing.
It appears a little bit soft as if it as been taken without using a tripod, and shooting into the light has produced flare that has degraded the image a bit.
I've done a quick mod to bring back a bit of the colour by adjusting the levels in curves and sharpened it to try and minimise the camerashake.
If possible a few more details about your equipment, software and the effect you're trying to achieve would help us to give you the advice you've asked for.
I also framed the image although this might not show up in the mod.