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Trying to capture the false dawn light as it illuminates the mist on Astbury Mere, Congleton. The soft pastel tones that only seem to come with below freezing temperatures and the autumn months.

Camera:Fuji S9600
Lens:fixed
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:The Waiting
Username:peterjuerges peterjuerges
Uploaded:28 Oct 2010 - 5:11 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Night / low light, Wildlife / nature
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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom860 Constructive Critique Points
28 Oct 2010 - 5:39 PM

All a bit central, but still very nice. Cut a slice off the bottom and take that LOGO with it. You might have lightened it, but it still pulls the eye like hell - what a pity.

Paul

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devlin
devlin  4651 forum posts India39 Constructive Critique Points
28 Oct 2010 - 6:22 PM

I like the soft pastel tones, would agree thought the composition could be improved. Have done a mod, cropping from the bottom and little from the top and side..a slight increase of saturation and warm LBA filter in PS..

Cheers and hope this helps

Prabh

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Eviscera
Eviscera e2 Member 81105 forum postsEviscera vcard United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
29 Oct 2010 - 4:43 PM

Nice moody image.

Your single focal point (the birds) do need to be placed on a third perhaps.

Its nicely minimalist , and I dont find the logo intrusive at all , its subtle enough not to act as a distraction.

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