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I almost never go back and work with an image a second time in post production but I just felt the first First Snow image was still lacking something. I changed the formate and a square image, toned down the snowy white background and brought up a bit more of the few background colors; a small branch and a few leaves. I'm a bit happier with this presentation. Your comments and suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you
Peter

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:105.0 mm f/2.8
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:22 Jan 2012 - 10:52 PM
Focal Length:105mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.6
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/10sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:First Snow - Presentation Two
Username:Peterpools Peterpools
Uploaded:24 Jan 2012 - 12:58 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants, General, Landscape / travel
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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jan 2012 - 1:42 AM

Colors are wonderful as are some of the details-- Seems a number of details have been targeted, which has made it hard for the 105mm (excellent choice of lens) to focus on---which one?
Love the bits of whiskers this plant has!

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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 7137 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece18 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jan 2012 - 6:35 AM

Well re-worked, Peter, I think you have improved the image, though the first was good to start with. Carol

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Lillian
Lillian e2 Member 5Lillian vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jan 2012 - 1:18 PM

Lovely image Peter
Lillian

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sweetpea62
sweetpea62 e2 Member 4sweetpea62 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jan 2012 - 2:24 PM

Well re-worked Pete,like both images,but I think this shows more detail on the diamonds in the ice.Wonderful shot.Well done..Lin

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cleg
cleg  4 United Kingdom
24 Jan 2012 - 4:47 PM

Great shot.
Adrian

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Peterpools
25 Jan 2012 - 12:54 AM

Thanks everyone for the critique and comments. Sp very much appreciated.
Peter

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Peagreen
Peagreen  4 England1 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2012 - 10:13 AM

Nicely re-worked Peter. I liked your first image, but this enhances the details of the leaves and the 'ice' diamonds. A wonderful imageSmile
Take care, Pauline

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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
25 Jan 2012 - 1:07 PM

Charming V2! This looks great! Good work. IB

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ugly
ugly e2 Member 6ugly vcard United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2012 - 7:12 AM

A nice image..
Well done...
Dave

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betts
betts  6 England
26 Jan 2012 - 10:06 PM

great image, lovely colours.
betts

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