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I am not any good at PShop so here is the second version. I await your comments!!

Camera:C D1
Lens:135
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Mellow Yellow V 2
Username:pgarwood pgarwood
Uploaded:21 Apr 2007 - 3:17 PM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel, Rape oilseed country yellow
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miptog
miptog  93532 forum posts United Kingdom61 Constructive Critique Points
21 Apr 2007 - 3:25 PM

Like the composition. The sky around the tree need a bit of technique practice. Mike

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pgarwood
pgarwood  1035 forum posts United Kingdom
21 Apr 2007 - 3:30 PM

As I said I am not god at PS!!!!

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JohnMcC
JohnMcC  7 Northern Ireland
21 Apr 2007 - 3:34 PM

Lovely photo
John Smile

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kezeka
kezeka  779 forum posts United States
21 Apr 2007 - 5:12 PM

I would just suggest cleaning up the edges of the tree in the forground with a slightly feathered brush if you want it to look a bit out of focus or just a hard brush if you want it to have clean edges. The background could use some work cleaning up the smooth tree line and making it appear rough as it looks like it should, but that is pixel by pixel work and by no means an easy task.

Not bad for a first PS, good luck! I really like the picture by the way, just needs a bit more work.
~Josh

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