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Another shot from the same session taken earlier this year.

Camera:Fuji S3pro
Lens:Nikon AFS18mm-200mm VR
Recording media:Digital
Title:Watching you watching Me
Username:phiggy phiggy
Uploaded:23 Sep 2006 - 10:48 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Portraits / people
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magicbox
magicbox  7 United Kingdom
23 Sep 2006 - 10:53 PM

Take the brightness down just a tad, but a beautiful shot none the less.
Tina

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conrad
conrad e2 Member 910870 forum postsconrad vcard 116 Constructive Critique Points
23 Sep 2006 - 11:02 PM

Compelling gaze, that. Very good.

Conrad

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Hanners e2 Member 8875 forum postsHanners vcard Ireland10 Constructive Critique Points
23 Sep 2006 - 11:28 PM

yes I think it just wants toning down just a little bit, not toot much though. An excellnt high-key portrait.




CLIX

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Rogerex
Rogerex  729 forum posts Australia12 Constructive Critique Points
23 Sep 2006 - 11:42 PM

Another stunning shot. Aptly titled, those eyes seem to be staring right at me! I love this just the way it is.
Roger

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jwatt
jwatt  8 Canada
24 Sep 2006 - 1:24 AM

Perhaps a tighter crop from the top in addition to dropping the brightness? I'm undecided about whether to crop tighter or show more of the hair, but leaning to a tighter crop at the top. Beautiful model and amazing eyes. Very nice capture.

James.

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tonymarq
tonymarq  8 United States
24 Sep 2006 - 3:48 AM

excellent eye contact and love how they stand out Phil!

stay well
tonymarq

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User_Removed
24 Sep 2006 - 5:59 AM

great high key portrait of this gorgeous woman!... post it in the GOE!

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cathal
cathal  9492 forum posts Ireland4 Constructive Critique Points
24 Sep 2006 - 10:09 AM

Great pose and expression, though a tad too bright. Also, the top of the head being cropped out is a touch dissapointing. Great picture though.

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Dee_licious1
24 Sep 2006 - 10:32 AM

Those eyes are stunning, as is the whole look to this. I like the fact that this is light, it works well for me. Cropping the top as you did didn't cause me any distractions either as the focus for me is her face/look.

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ruralscotland
24 Sep 2006 - 12:52 PM

Stunning model, eyes (as before) are excellent, very well taken!

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scrufy  9
24 Sep 2006 - 1:53 PM

perfect shot i would tidy up hair at back n right maybe though but thats just me it works just the way it is too click

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yjjeep  10
24 Sep 2006 - 11:04 PM

The focal point of the photo is very well done and grabs the eye.

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fellsnapper
26 Sep 2006 - 7:34 PM

I wonder about a slightly tighter crop from the top but only because I find the wisp of hair top left to be a little distracting. That said, this is a beautiful portrait. The eyes are magnetic.

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exposure  91304 forum posts England
5 Nov 2006 - 4:20 PM

Just Beautiful a lovely highkey image beautiful eye detail and pose lighting and composition.
Pauline.

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Cj-Photography
30 Mar 2008 - 9:00 AM

this model is the spitting image of the model on the box of the Bowens 'Studio in a Box' lighting equipment. Check it out.

Is it her, seriously, I can't find a difference, even the hair is the same.

http://www.photomart.co.uk/prodimg/BW4292UK_1_zoom.jpg

Last Modified By Cj-Photography at 30 Mar 2008 - 9:01 AM

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