Wakefield College 2

whipspeed (e2 Member)

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20 Jul 2010 - 3:08 PM

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Really like the way the building cuts through the frame like an arrow. I don't think it's tight in the frame, it feels rather as if it fits it.

banehawi (Critique Team)

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20 Jul 2010 - 4:13 PM

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The best of the series. What makes this better is that it is a dramatic rendering of the building, enhancing the scale, angles and shape by the position youve taken, and the lens used. the distortions introduced by the lens work in your favour here too. I like the warmth of the evening sum on one side, and the blue tone of darkness encroaching on the other side. Im not sure if you have added some blue to the clouds or they were like this, but would think a little less in the clouds might look better, while retaining it in the building.

Building like this, with lines and sharp angles, are well suited to mono, so I suggest you think about that and have loaded a mod.


Regards


Willie

chensuriashi (e2 Member)

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20 Jul 2010 - 4:20 PM

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No Phil...As soon as I saw it I thought yes this is better, very dramatic building shot...Well seen and photographed. Congrats Chen.

banehawi (Critique Team)

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20 Jul 2010 - 5:29 PM

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Phil, - if you used the Topaz filter on this it might introduce the cast?

There is a cyan cast on the left, but it looks like its perhaps a result of the light on that side of the building?


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NEWMANP (Critique Team)

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22 Jul 2010 - 11:21 PM

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best composition of the group but im thinking the image is made for mono.
Phil