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Due to looking at this photo on a TFT screen rather than a CRT, I have made some very minor but quite important changes. Thanks to those who pointed this out.

Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2 Pro
Lens:70-300mm
Recording media:2GB CF
Title:R e v i s e d
Username:philonline philonline
Uploaded:5 Oct 2005 - 4:32 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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itsasetamendi
5 Oct 2005 - 4:40 AM

Nice portrait. I agree that it looks better with the wispy hairs removed.
Gareth

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MediumSizeUnavailable

exxxtremely beautiful. and not only the model.

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starstriders
5 Oct 2005 - 4:51 AM

Really nice portrait. Have you tried it with cropping the bottom to just under the chin, I think that works quite well.

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xanda
xanda  10244 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2005 - 5:06 AM

Excellent portrait. Click.

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ajtorres
ajtorres e2 Member 10ajtorres vcard Argentina
5 Oct 2005 - 5:19 AM

I like it . Click. Alejandro.

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thewaiter
thewaiter  131177 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2005 - 5:26 AM

great portrait, great model.....

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andyr
andyr  1037 forum posts
5 Oct 2005 - 7:00 AM

excellent work, nice composition: the left side of the picture doesnt look too 'empty' either (if that makes sense!)
the B&W is spot on, giving a good sense of depth to the picture. Nice image and as has been mentioned before, nice model!

-click-

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paulcr
paulcr  91536 forum posts Ireland9 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2005 - 7:07 AM

Hi Phil. Lovely portrait here. So well lit and composed. Serious yet very attractive expression. PAul

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U4eA
U4eA  10475 forum posts England
5 Oct 2005 - 7:44 AM

My kind of portraiture, class. Love the b&w tones and the lighting.

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candid
candid  9
5 Oct 2005 - 8:25 AM

It always helps to have such an attractive face to photograph . . . but you have done a good job here . . . with a personal stamp on it.

Alan

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silburkp  10 England
5 Oct 2005 - 10:48 AM

Very nice portrait, well lit and great in B&W.

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geoffwd
geoffwd  9 United Kingdom
5 Oct 2005 - 11:44 AM

Still excellent

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RipleyExile
6 Oct 2005 - 3:53 AM

I do like this. I think the hair across the face being towards the edge of the frame works very well.

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mtbrider
mtbrider  10
6 Oct 2005 - 7:17 AM

Very nice... Can I ask how you converted the image from colour to B&W? or was it B&W from the camera. *click*

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philonline
6 Oct 2005 - 7:33 AM

I used photoshop. Image>Mode>Greyscale hope this helps.

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mtbrider
mtbrider  10
6 Oct 2005 - 10:32 AM

Great thanks... When I use Greyscale photofinished images have a funny hue to them, I don't know why. MD

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silverwolf
silverwolf  13 United Kingdom
11 Oct 2005 - 10:14 AM

Stunning image. Excellent lighting and eye contact.

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annefromleo
21 Oct 2005 - 2:27 PM

just beautful, well balanced and great lighting well done

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