Great effort the only point i would like to pick up on is to lift the glasses up out the way of the eyes and try to avoid reflections or highlighs in the glasses. I would like to see more of the eyes but the highlighs interfere with that.

The skintones are lovely lit and the smoke adds some atmosphere to the image well done

Gaz lovely shot amazing colour too , If anything i would give the image a slight crop, Whilst there is a lot of colour going on in the foreground i think we need less of it in the background though, The reason is because there is something of interest going on in the background with the guy cooking something to hold your interest. The girls and the colour in the foreground give strong interest too the orange bowl on the left of the girl the orange crate on the right and the orange on the floor to the right all adds to the image for me and the smoke in the background adds extra atmosphere to the image see my crop. great shot cheers Kev