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tweaked it a bit
tried using some of the wonderful tips mrswoolybill gave me on the original picture
thank you for the tips xxx

i would recommend visiting Miora's portifilo
she has taken many stunning photos, all of which are farrrrrrrrrr better than mine!
http://www.ephotozine.com/user/mrswoolybill-51734

thanks again xxx

Brand:camera360
Camera:Apple iPhone 4
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Nov 2013 - 1:02 PM
Focal Length:3mm
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/392sec
ISO:80
Metering Mode:Spot
Title:The joy of school? (2)
Username:Pinkreader55 Pinkreader55
Uploaded:14 Nov 2013 - 7:31 PM
Tags:General, Humour / fun, Portraits / people
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84270 forum postsKarenFB vcard England162 Constructive Critique Points
14 Nov 2013 - 8:24 PM

Flipping between the two, there does seem to be more 'depth' with this one.

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7404 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom987 Constructive Critique Points
14 Nov 2013 - 9:41 PM

Very nicely tweaked, you haven't pushed it too far, it just has that bit more substance. Well done.
And I wish I could have managed this when I was your age!
Moira

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Pinkreader55
Pinkreader55 Junior Member 2 United Kingdom
14 Nov 2013 - 10:18 PM

Thank you!
Your advise was very helpful!
Hehe, I saw two of my friends having a laugh and I just thought it was a nice little picture to take
It wasn't planned at all! I just thought it was a great moment to catch!
I used a free app called camera360. I love this app, it has loads of effects that can make any picture look good, but for this image i just added a few tiny tiny details and then made it even better with your help!
My friends aren't into photography much so they find it funny how I whizz my phone or camera out every now and then to take a photo of such small things. Of course they are used to taking photos on holidays and other special events, so they don't really see things the way I do!
My dad introduced me to photography. All the big fancy cameras! I always wanted to have a go! I asked one day if I could give his big canon a go and surprisingly he handed it over! As I'm not the sort of person who asks about things and would much prefer to find things out for myself, I sat there fiddling around with it for a while pressing all the buttons! I ended up taking many random pictures that were all deleted but they were all focused. I fell in love with photography after that!
I then joined an after school club. This encouraged me however the teacher running it really didn't like me and only liked me for the photos I took, so I was knocked back a lot as she really wasn't very nice to me about my work. However, joining this club really showed me the path to follow. I then found this website and I am gradually improving (I hope)! I look back at my first few photos on here and think about how I thought they were good at the time hehe! (I think that means I'm improving and seeing things differently!)

Hehe
I just realised how long this was!
It isn't often I get to talk about this stuff! None of my friends really get how I see images in almost everything! But they are still amazing people to have!

Thank you xxx
Keep smiling! Grin Tongue

Last Modified By Pinkreader55 at 14 Nov 2013 - 10:22 PM

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