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I have seen the river higher than this, but not for a few years. I was taken by the expanses of water and sky but not sure I have the correct perspective.

Brand:Pentax
Camera:Pentax K-5 Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:sigma 10-20mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 Nov 2012 - 3:52 PM
Focal Length:15mm
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:+0.3
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:After The Rain
Username:Ploughman Ploughman
Uploaded:30 Nov 2012 - 12:04 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10821 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2821 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2012 - 1:56 PM

As an image intended to show the river depth, youve got down low, shwn the river band and submerged trees, so it looks good. Theres nothing else really in the shot to anchor it if composition isconsidered.

The river is in the horizontal centre, - which does work as intended, but it also worthwhile taking a look at placing it lower.

Theres a little overexposure in the sky, with the lower half a touch dark, so you can work on that also if so inclined. it gets the message across for me.

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Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2012 - 6:40 PM

Unusual from you, but not keen on this one. Just nothing much theere and no subject as such. The 10/20 lens is great, but tempts these super wide angle shots which finish up being just too wide. It's personal stuff, but, for me you needed some dramatic lighting to get away with this.

Paul

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