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Food and fly Butterfly

Camera:Kodak
Lens:Schneider
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Butterfly Food
Username:poali poali
Uploaded:8 Oct 2010 - 4:53 PM
Tags:Nature, Wildlife / nature
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84310 forum posts England163 Constructive Critique Points
8 Oct 2010 - 9:24 PM

A Hummingbird Hawkmoth, brilliantly caught! These moths are always on the go, never staying on the same flower for more then a few seconds! You've caught this one well, but I think I would crop a lot closer (possibly removing the left hand side!).

Last Modified By KarenFB at 8 Oct 2010 - 9:25 PM

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pamelajean Critique Team 8799 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1615 Constructive Critique Points
9 Oct 2010 - 12:28 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hello, Ali. A good effort to capture a very difficult subject. Freezing the movement of the moth will be hard, and even if you got the body sharp, there would probably still be movement in the wings, which is fine. I would suggest you try a bit closer next time and focus on the moth using a fast shutter speed. You might like to have a go with continuous shooting for this subject. With this image, as has been said, a crop to the left is needed, but the image loses detail at this small size, so try the crop on your original.
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