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a great graffiti!

Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:70-200 f2.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:still a live
Username:POLO47 POLO47
Uploaded:14 Sep 2009 - 8:40 PM
Tags:General, Humour / fun, Photo journalism, Street photography
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ge22y
ge22y  6115 forum posts Wales12 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2009 - 9:47 PM

Great capture, well seen, I think it would strengthen the image if you cropped the clutter away at the top of the wall, if you could re shoot the image I would look at shooting head on and trying to eliminate the grass at the bottom.

Gez

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pamelajean Critique Team 8799 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1613 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2009 - 2:41 PM

A great find, Paul, and although I understand why you have left in some of the background and foreground, mainly to put it into context, I would like to have either seen this with a lot more background and foreground, or as a complete abstract. My modification reflects the latter.
Pamela.

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