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V2: Willie's (Banehawi) modification of my previous upload. Outstanding job.
This should be the last of this mini series.
Thanks so much for your comments and votes on "Curls". SmileSmile

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon Powershot SX160 IS
Lens:5.0 - 80.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 28.1 - 450.0 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Nov 2013 - 12:16 PM
Focal Length:20.3mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.0
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/15sec
Exposure Comp:+1/3
ISO:3200
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Coming and Going
Username:Potra Potra
Uploaded:7 Dec 2013 - 1:03 AM
Tags:Black & white, Caracas, Crowd, People, Subway, Trains, Venezuela
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pablophotographer

V2 for me, well done for both

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 4Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 2:37 AM

Brilliant depictation of the busy station with comings and goings.
I like the inclusion of the upper level also.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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SimonFletch
SimonFletch e2 Member SimonFletch vcard Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 4:45 AM

Wow! Marian, your Palo Verde station is one busy place.
The train leaving in V2 adds even more movement & the B&W suits the images beautifully.
Well taken!

Simon

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ddolfelin
ddolfelin e2 Member 234 forum postsddolfelin vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 5:01 AM

Shadow Saturday indeed!
Good job, Marian.

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RysiekJan
RysiekJan e2 Member 8149 forum postsRysiekJan vcard United Kingdom
7 Dec 2013 - 7:00 AM

V1 for me, has a more crowded feel to it.

Richard

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Mollycat
Mollycat e2 Member 1Mollycat vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 7:22 AM

Busy station, lots of busy people creating loads of shadows. Two good images Marian. Grin Peter.

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silverbells
7 Dec 2013 - 7:45 AM

Incredibly busy! Is it always like this there? Great mono presentation. V1 for me as I think the front of the train helps.

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lblythe
lblythe e2 Member 1lblythe vcard United Kingdom
7 Dec 2013 - 8:43 AM

I've liked these gritty urban images a lot. V2 for me but a difficult choice.
L

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capto
capto e2 Member 21091 forum postscapto vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 10:18 AM

Love the hustle and bustle of this.Smile

ivor

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DicksPics
DicksPics e2 Member 3DicksPics vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 10:20 AM

Busy, busy, busy - two amazing images, Marian.

Richard

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 33150 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom102 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 12:32 PM

Inventive imagery very well done...

Nathan GrinGrinGrin

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7420 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1001 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 1:34 PM

Yes, V1 is better balanced, like it a lot.
Moira

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saltireblue
saltireblue Site Moderator 43858 forum postssaltireblue vcard Norway25 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 3:28 PM

Interesting to see how this image is a kind of inverted mirror image of Willie's mod on your previous upload from here.

The dark, gritty treatment adds to the feeling of daily drudgery traveling to work is for so many millions...

Malc

Last Modified By saltireblue at 7 Dec 2013 - 3:29 PM

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Nikonuser1
Nikonuser1 e2 Member 2Nikonuser1 vcard United Kingdom9 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 3:42 PM

V2 for me MarianSmile


Cliff

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Davidroid
Davidroid Junior Member 1 Argentina
7 Dec 2013 - 8:43 PM

Nice cut!

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dark_lord
dark_lord Critique Team 101466 forum postsdark_lord vcard England126 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2013 - 9:33 PM

The best so far. V1 is very good, but then I saw V2, which is my favourite.

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jacquig
7 Dec 2013 - 10:41 PM

Lovely dynamic of contrasts to these pictures, particularly v1, with the perfect title. I love the strong structural lines and the high contrast of tones. V1 for me, as I think the front of the train works really well. Smile

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whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis e2 Member 163 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England73 Constructive Critique Points
8 Dec 2013 - 9:45 PM

Willie's is clever, but I think I prefer yours here. Many people here seem to think V2 is yours too.... they obviously didn't bother to read your description!


Alan

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Source
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11 Dec 2013 - 11:12 PM

Brillinat scenes,great style and great captures.Chaotic.
-source

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