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Playa Guayacán, Isla de Margarita.
V2: Cropped after Barbara's suggestion.

Brand:EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:10 Jul 2013 - 5:02 PM
Focal Length:8.7mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.2
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/1250sec
Exposure Comp:-5/3
ISO:80
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:Innocence
Username:Potra Potra
Uploaded:10 Sep 2013 - 1:59 AM
Tags:Beach, Boats, Dusk, Landscape / travel, Margarita, Sand, Venezuela
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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 3:11 AM

The processing is rich and dark, a wonderful slice of life shown here!

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Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
10 Sep 2013 - 4:08 AM

This is a lovely image Marian !! I want to go there NOW !!

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handlerstudio
handlerstudio e2 Member 2handlerstudio vcard United States5 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 4:38 AM

Wonderful image, Marian, and quite some spectacular scenery. I'll go there with Herman.

Peter

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S_Psharma
S_Psharma  2 India1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 4:44 AM

Stunning beauty.

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ddolfelin
ddolfelin e2 Member 234 forum postsddolfelin vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 5:52 AM

A beautiful scene.
Too dark and blurry for me to be in your top shots, Marian.
Perhaps I should clean the monitor.

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Andysnapper
Andysnapper e2 Member 6100 forum postsAndysnapper vcard England18 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 6:36 AM

I like this, I don't know why but I do. It has the feel of being taken on a 1970's Kodak Instamatic camera on some cheap no name film and it just works....somehow. Interesting, was the 70's look what you were after here Marian?

Andy

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barbarahirst
barbarahirst e2 Member 6barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 7:14 AM

I am intrigued with your camera setting with this incredibly moody image.
Note to F G.......be more adventurous with the BBC.....
I would love to see this cropped on the left hand side of the screen
I would like those 2 boats taken out
I realise it would make a different image and possibly not what you wanted

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Nikonuser1
Nikonuser1 e2 Member 2Nikonuser1 vcard United Kingdom9 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 7:20 AM

Intersteing Marian, agree with AndySmile


Cliff

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capto
capto e2 Member 21139 forum postscapto vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 7:50 AM

Just a beautiful place.Smile

ivor

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franken
franken e2 Member 123125 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 8:42 AM


Quote: The processing is rich and dark, a wonderful slice of life shown here!

I couldn't have said it any better.

Ken

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DicksPics
DicksPics e2 Member 3DicksPics vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 9:19 AM

What a beautiful plaec, Marian.

Richard

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rontear
rontear e2 Member 11rontear vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 9:35 AM

Not sharp enough Marian, had it been it would have more impact..
Ron

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 4Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 11:11 AM

Softer image which is probably what you intended to highlight the child sitting
lost in his own world. The boats are very photogenic also.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41046 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England136 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 11:58 AM

It does have a 70's slide film feel to it, Marian. For me a little more light needed in the shadows and crop out totally the half-boat on the left. I had a play in PS5 but Mods not enabled.

Dave

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saltireblue
saltireblue Site Moderator 43907 forum postssaltireblue vcard Norway25 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 4:37 PM

The child left to its own devices on a busy working beach while the adults go about their daily work.
A sign of times gone by.

Malc

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nonur
nonur e2 Member 5nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2013 - 4:42 PM

What a lovely and peaceful inlet, Marian! I also like your title.

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Potra
Potra e2 Member 1Potra vcard Venezuela
10 Sep 2013 - 6:05 PM

Thank you everybody for your comments on this picture. I just uploaded a version with the cropping suggested by my dearest Barbara.

I didn't want to give it a 70's look, but definitely wanted to make it look like an impressionist painting. What I captured is a piece of real life in a fishermen village at dusk. Everyone is on their own, ignoring me while I was stealing this moment for my self enjoyment.

In this picture, I loved the rough edges of the figures, the thick strokes of color and the purple highlights mixed with the dark verdigris of the sea. To me is more a painting than a picture, I processed it intentionally to give that impression.

And finally, the star of it is that child playing by himself, safe and free.

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Michaela_Solway

It does have that 70,s feel, intentional or not.. A little soft for me ..

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jaktis
jaktis e2 Member 1081 forum postsjaktis vcard Sweden
11 Sep 2013 - 4:14 AM

V2 is so good

Peter

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gajewski
gajewski e2 Member 10gajewski vcard United States9 Constructive Critique Points
11 Sep 2013 - 6:35 AM

I want to be there. V2 does work better,
-=\Walter

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Source
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14 Sep 2013 - 11:24 PM

Really like the soft focus and colours.Both versions are great
-source

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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
22 Sep 2013 - 6:14 PM

My kind of beach with all those colourful boats! Grin
Wouldn't mind beeing there right now... IB

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