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my new Harley Road King 100th Annivesary Model Year

Camera:Sony Cyber-shot DSC-F707
Lens:Zeiss
Recording media:digital
Title:Road King
Username:qwertshadow qwertshadow
Uploaded:8 Oct 2003 - 1:48 AM
Tags:Transport
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johnL
johnL  11115 forum posts
8 Oct 2003 - 12:54 PM

Nice bike and good setting! Just misses in my opinion though-I can see a couple of possible good pics in here but this just falters as it is trying to do different things at the same time-show the bike and show the context.
An upright shot with the bike turned so that it is the same width as the sign would look good as a closer shot on the bike. The bike side on with more of the building showing would be a good context shot. Could be straightened up and full sign would maybe look better. Hope my suggestions are helpful.

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johnL  11115 forum posts
8 Oct 2003 - 5:34 PM

Thought I'd just add that its still a good shot-the bike and the background both combine to make a good image. I am suggesting ways in which a bit of playing around might make a 'tidier' image.

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qwertshadow
9 Oct 2003 - 12:11 AM

Thanks for the suggestions. I don't consider this one of my best photos, but I wanted to submit a quick "snap" to show off the bike that is now put away for the Winter.I will submit better photos next riding season.

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