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First time, I just tried to capture a portrait of a small girl staring at the glorious past of her life which is being depicted by the train. Please give your valuable comments so that I can improve my photography.

Camera:Canon PowerShot A530
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Memories
Username:rajsaha001 rajsaha001
Uploaded:18 Jan 2010 - 8:09 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Petro_Conradie
18 Jan 2010 - 8:15 AM

I love this, very well done
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kami13
kami13  5 India
18 Jan 2010 - 8:17 AM

I think the angle should be changed,otherwise everything is good.

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clicknimagine
18 Jan 2010 - 11:35 AM

beautiful tones here, lovely shot...

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84270 forum postsKarenFB vcard England162 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2010 - 3:45 PM

A beautiful capture, I think the angle is perfect! Smile Because the lighting is quite low, it is a little noisy, but apart from that it's a gorgeous portrait. I wonder what she was thinking as she looked at the train!

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MrsS
MrsS  74527 forum posts England18 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2010 - 4:20 PM

A super image - well thought out and processed Smile

Fran x

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nicnicrogers
24 Jan 2010 - 2:45 PM

I love this concept, really! Her pose is perfect, and the angle too, the only thing i'd suggest an improvement on is the clarity? A might above maybe to make her eyes shine or try in a different light?
Great image, well done

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SteveNZ
SteveNZ  6 United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jan 2010 - 7:00 AM

Superb capture. Makes me wonder what she is thinking!

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shreel
shreel  4 India1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2010 - 4:04 PM

nice perception while clicking the picture...good composition...bt i wuld have prefered a less grainy picture...n if possible post a version with the true colours of the picture with the sepia mode...

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