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It was early morning when I arrived at Bogor, a small city near to Jakarta. A girl look at me and give a sweet smile.

Brand:Canon 5 D
Lens:135 mm l
Recording media:TIFF (digital)
Title:Smile from Kampoong
Username:Rarindra Rarindra
Uploaded:6 Jul 2011 - 2:40 PM
Tags:Indonesia, Kampoong, Portraits / people, Smile, Village
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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 6Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jul 2011 - 2:48 PM

Beautiful...........Sandy

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pdove
pdove  5 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2011 - 3:19 PM

Love the lighting and composition. Would perhaps crop or clone out the curved highlight on extreme right but at that I am being a bit 'picky'. Regards, Phil

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rontear
rontear e2 Member 11rontear vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jul 2011 - 4:25 PM

Expressive. Ron.

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HectorRivera
6 Jul 2011 - 6:13 PM

Beautiful, love the smile, light and general compo. However, I have to agree with Phil and Frank. A tighter crop, eliminatign the curved object and moving the watermark bellow would heve been better.

Hector

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Alandyv8
Alandyv8  31 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jul 2011 - 6:18 PM

Beatiful shot, but I would definitely crop some off the right hand side,

Mike

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Dave_Holdham
6 Jul 2011 - 7:31 PM

Very nice, like the colours and beautiful lighting, would have enjoyed more without the distracting copyright banner, which is my only gripe,
regards

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derekhansen
derekhansen e2 Member 5185 forum postsderekhansen vcard United Kingdom24 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jul 2011 - 11:11 PM

Beautiful light and a lovely portrait.
Derek

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avacreates
6 Jun 2012 - 1:50 PM

Absolutely beautiful photo, I think you could get an award for it without the logo on their faces and a slight crop to the right - well done
AVA

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