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Brand:Lumix
Camera:Panasonic Lumix FZ35
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Sep 2002 - 1:41 AM
Focal Length:5.4mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.7
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:Cypress forest
Username:rbai2007 rbai2007
Uploaded:28 Jul 2011 - 7:01 PM
Tags:Cypress, Italy, Landscape / travel, Tuscany, Val d'orcia
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alansnap
alansnap e2 Member 10529 forum postsalansnap vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jul 2011 - 8:06 PM

What a lovely shot. The colour works so well.
Alan

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Jestertheclown
28 Jul 2011 - 8:39 PM

I'd be inclined to crop quite a bit from the bottom of this to lose most of the ragged stuff in the foreground.
Then I'd slightly desaturate the rest and straighten the horizon.
I'd also get rid of the fence (?) on the hill top on the RHS.
Hope this helps.

Bren.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 28 Jul 2011 - 8:40 PM

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NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jul 2011 - 11:11 PM

hi, i must admit i had already done the mod when i saw Brens comments above, i agree totally.

the main area of interest is in the top part so i did a letter box crop and the sky blue was a little oversaturated so i selected the blue channel and reduced sat a little. the fence i spotted but wasnt worried about so left it in.

must admit though its a lovely view and an area id love to photograph (Tuscany i assume)

best regards
Phil

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10901 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2898 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jul 2011 - 11:23 PM

A very nice scene, well caprured.


I think it can do with brightening a small amount; cropping a little from the bottom, and a lot from the right; and recovering shadow detail to bring out the colour in the trees.

All done in the mod,


Hope this helps,


Regards


Willie

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rbai2007
rbai2007  4 Argentina
29 Jul 2011 - 6:44 PM

Thanks very mucho for the valious comment!!! Grin

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