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Another of the band in canal street

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:The Band
Username:redjoker redjoker
Uploaded:19 Jun 2008 - 6:28 PM
Tags:Black & white, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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Votes:19
Group Event:Manchester Meet
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Brilliant tones

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19 Jun 2008 - 7:17 PM

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Strobe
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1254 forum posts United Kingdom
19 Jun 2008 - 7:17 PM
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Good street photography Smile

dandeakin
dandeakin (e2 Member)
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167 forum postsdandeakin vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
19 Jun 2008 - 7:56 PM
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great image. The two guys behind him are abit distracting , but still a great shot. Well caught.

Sahyadri
20 Jun 2008 - 8:22 AM
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nice one.... those two guys really does distract , may be you took another one from about 15- 20 degrees right to get thier faces??? I am a beginner too and now i move around to get a better angle ( EPZ pros really help you learn Smile )

saw your forum on votes.... trust me, who cares about votes, go for the comments and from right people to learn and improve the work we do...
All the best Meg. you are talented Smile

Last Modified By Sahyadri at 20 Jun 2008 - 8:23 AM
zander
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1570 forum posts England17 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2008 - 1:17 PM
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A different angle is deffinitely what's required here to either isolate the guitarist and to stop other people's body parts appear to be growing out of him, or to include more of the other performers. Obviously the extent to which you change your position depends on what result you're after.

I like the tones and contrast that you've used. Maybe just dodge the end of the guitar and arm/body in dark shadow a touch to reintroduce a bit of detail.

Last Modified By zander at 20 Jun 2008 - 1:17 PM
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redjoker
20 Jun 2008 - 1:25 PM
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it was hard to get infront of them as there was a crowd gathering, i have another shot, uploaded as V2, which is a better angle i think

thankyou for your comments i agree with what you have said and will bare it in mind Grin

pepperst
20 Jun 2008 - 8:43 PM
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Really like the first one more, good interest in the guys face. Charractor, feeling, story its all there.

In future get to know the camera more (I know its new) and change the dof to blur out the background and bring more attention on to his face.

nice street work though, keep going

redjoker
20 Jun 2008 - 8:57 PM
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good point a better DOF would have vastly improved the shot, was having problems with the camera that day tho, AF was playing me up and i was having a hard time focusing, but thats sorted now so ill bear that in mind for any future shots Grin

Goggz
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21 Jun 2008 - 1:41 AM
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They were good too Smile
I think V2 has a cleaner look, but he had such an expressive face didn't he!
Cheers, Goggz

gossyboy
23 Jun 2008 - 2:24 PM
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Both good street shots

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