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I was trying to capture the sunset over busselton jetty in western australia along with properly composing the line of the jetty in the picture, any comments would be appreciated, thanks

Camera:Canon EOS 30D
Lens:18-35mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Busselton Jetty sunset
Username:richlyndon richlyndon
Uploaded:23 Apr 2009 - 1:49 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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G_Biermanski
23 Apr 2009 - 1:58 AM

Just amazing! lovely colors.

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DonSchaeffer
23 Apr 2009 - 2:00 AM

wonderful color . Vivid image.

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johnjrp
johnjrp e2 Member 10431 forum postsjohnjrp vcard Australia5 Constructive Critique Points
23 Apr 2009 - 5:06 AM

Just joined, from Sydney and you take a shot of something from my stamping ground. lol. Great lighting and magic clouds. Next time you are over let me know and we can catch up. John

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rajeshdas
rajeshdas  5 India
23 Apr 2009 - 5:07 AM

This is absolutley stunning
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jimpy1 e2 Member 5jimpy1 vcard England
23 Apr 2009 - 7:19 AM

Like it!
Jim

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wrinkles e2 Member 5349 forum postswrinkles vcard United Kingdom
23 Apr 2009 - 10:28 AM

Fantastic colours nice composition.

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Joeblowfromoz
23 Apr 2009 - 1:34 PM

Really wonderful image for your first upload. Look forward to seeing many more..Jo

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John_Frid
John_Frid  8514 forum posts United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
23 Apr 2009 - 6:07 PM

This looks like a very interesting place and you have certainly captured it in some dramatic light.

From my perspective I would have liked a littlle more detail in the shadow areas, especially for the couple on the beach and under the jetty.

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Charlesmoss
23 Apr 2009 - 9:02 PM

Love the light and it's well taken not so sure about the couple.
The person in red drew my eye taking me away from the main view.
Could try and clon them out also there are 3 black marks in the sky
expect they are birds .
Reagrds
Charles

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richlyndon
24 Apr 2009 - 2:41 AM

Thankyou for all the comments, very much appreciated. Agree should have cloned out the black marks (yes they are birds) and will try and do something with the folks up front.

John thanks, next time I am over in Busselton would love to catch up and gets some tips

Rich

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Term e2 Member 885 forum postsTerm vcard England9 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2009 - 12:57 PM

a great image, only thing I could suggest would be a tighter crop along the right side of the first building, and to remove the people and dark spots as previously mentioned.

Ben

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