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I'm grateful to my friend whose work I admire and who kindly suggested several alternative approaches to one of my earlier uploads here ... this is one of them!

Any feedback (+/-) welcomed!

Thank you for viewing.

Susie :o)

Camera:Canon EOS 300D
Lens:Canon 50mm f/1.4
Recording media:Raw
Title:__*.
Username:rosie42 rosie42
Uploaded:17 Mar 2006 - 2:42 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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claret
claret e2 Member 1049 forum postsclaret vcard England
17 Mar 2006 - 2:44 AM

Striking portrait. Excellent presentation.
Iain

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Consulo
Consulo e2 Member 10815 forum postsConsulo vcard Scotland10 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2006 - 2:47 AM

Lovely shot, Susie. Smile

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CathyT
CathyT  87346 forum posts United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2006 - 2:53 AM

Very striking. Your friends advice was sound.
Well done.
Cathy

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Chocwendy
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17 Mar 2006 - 3:00 AM

This is great! Is he available?!!!
Wendy

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stix
stix e2 Member 10924 forum postsstix vcard United Kingdom87 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2006 - 3:15 AM

HI Susie
I like it, the crop works well and I like the B&W treatment you have given it.It could be a little sharper, but its not bad considering thats quite a hefty crop from the orginal. Looking at the orginal I think I would have used the 'other side' of his face, its better looking!
Martin

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rhion
rhion e2 Member 1135 forum postsrhion vcard United Kingdom
17 Mar 2006 - 3:52 AM

Good use of space Susie - funny how the bits without anything in them (inc the border) can be as important as the subject isn't it?
It's such a great picture that, as I was eating my lunch with one hand I couldn't resist doing an alternative take on it with the other. Hope you don't mind a couple of mods made whilst eating a rice cake!
Good stuff Susie.
R

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MediumSizeUnavailable
MediumSizeUnavailable e2 Member 91503 forum postsMediumSizeUnavailable vcard Belgium44 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2006 - 3:54 AM

really superb Susie. Liked the original, but this lifts it a level higher. And the presentation is perfect for this. You should show it to the guy... sure he'll love it

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dusted
dusted e2 Member 10505 forum postsdusted vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2006 - 7:40 AM

have to say I much prefer this version (mho)

wonderful image

si

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vparmar
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17 Mar 2006 - 8:35 AM

lovely shot well done

vinny

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AngelaD
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17 Mar 2006 - 8:35 AM

This works well; a much better presentation, excellent.

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TessC
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17 Mar 2006 - 11:11 AM

Like it! Works well, Nice tones used..

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ron thomas
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17 Mar 2006 - 11:49 AM

Really works well, the presentation is spot-on.

Ron.

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rosie42
rosie42 e2 Member 10rosie42 vcard Australia
17 Mar 2006 - 11:53 AM

Thank you Iain, Michael, Cathy, Si, Vinny, Angela, Tess and Ron for taking the time to view and comment ... it's much appreciated!

lol Wendy - not sure, but I'd certainly happily photograph him again!

Hi Martin - appreciate your considered feedback, as always. Actually elected not to apply any sharpening to this at all, so a sharper result is certainly an option.

Richard - thank you so much for taking the time and effort to prepare the mods! I love the way there's so many potential images within any single capture. Your thoughtful impressions are also welcomed, as always ...

Koen - thank you for your valued comments, I'm grateful for you dropping by!

Susie :o)

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bliba
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17 Mar 2006 - 3:16 PM

great image ...interesting crop and presentation !Spot on you .....

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rosie42
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18 Mar 2006 - 1:14 AM

Cheers Oliver - thank you for looking ...

Susie :o)

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stix
stix e2 Member 10924 forum postsstix vcard United Kingdom87 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2006 - 5:33 AM

HI Susie
I couldnt resist a mod, whadda think?
Martin

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clevercloggs
clevercloggs e2 Member 10237 forum postsclevercloggs vcard United Arab Emirates2 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2006 - 7:10 AM

great image, like the toning very much. click

quickly visited the modifications. I think the sepia colour is the best. Its composition is interesting and the image is razor sharp.

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JCowlan
JCowlan e2 Member 9JCowlan vcard England
18 Mar 2006 - 11:58 AM

Nice work Susie


well done

James

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bassan
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18 Mar 2006 - 2:54 PM

Strong image, well done!

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rosie42
rosie42 e2 Member 10rosie42 vcard Australia
18 Mar 2006 - 10:27 PM

Hi Martin - thank you so much for going to the trouble to prepare a mod! Your version is close to one of the other crops suggested by my friend, and I agree that it's probably his 'best side' ... thank you once again!

Cheers also Robert, James and Sam ... very grateful for your impressions!

Susie :o)

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hebdens
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18 Mar 2006 - 10:51 PM

great shot, love the crop and tone, fab work.Glad to be no 30 !!!!!!

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stix
stix e2 Member 10924 forum postsstix vcard United Kingdom87 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2006 - 11:25 PM

Hi Susie
I think my mod might look a bit bland, although better looking! and his ear seems distractingly large, even though i blurred it.Anyway food for thought. Well done on getting an rc.Three in a row and I will have to upgrade you.
Martin

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rosie42
rosie42 e2 Member 10rosie42 vcard Australia
18 Mar 2006 - 11:32 PM

Thank you, Tracy - appreciate your feedback!

Thanks also, Martin - I prefer the version above too but grateful for you considering alternative approaches ... oh, and upgrade me from what to what? lol

Susie :o)

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xinia
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19 Mar 2006 - 5:17 AM

works very well

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stix
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19 Mar 2006 - 1:43 PM

Economy to Business.

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rosie42
rosie42 e2 Member 10rosie42 vcard Australia
19 Mar 2006 - 1:47 PM

Thanks so much, Maggie ... and well that's okay then Martin! Would certainly much prefer luxuriating at the pointy end to strap-hanging at the back of the aircraft! lol

Susie :o)

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stix
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19 Mar 2006 - 2:06 PM

Youv'e got to get the RC first.... Otherwise you stay in cattle class.

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rosie42
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19 Mar 2006 - 2:13 PM

lol () *pout*

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ljesmith
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21 Mar 2006 - 12:28 AM

Lovely use of framing and focus.

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rosie42
rosie42 e2 Member 10rosie42 vcard Australia
21 Mar 2006 - 12:25 PM

Thanks so much, Luke ...

Susie :o)

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21 Mar 2006 - 3:50 PM

smart crop!... nice work!

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CollY
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22 Mar 2006 - 7:32 PM

Striking, love the off centre approach and the tones used here. The crop works well with the strenght of his jawline.
Well done
Colleen

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rosie42
rosie42 e2 Member 10rosie42 vcard Australia
22 Mar 2006 - 7:46 PM

Thank you Peter and Colleen - appreciate you each dropping by ...

Susie :o)

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alexanderL
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30 Apr 2006 - 10:46 AM

interesting shot well exposed and it realy works in B/W

click
alex

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POOCHIE
POOCHIE e2 Member 8POOCHIE vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
8 May 2006 - 6:53 AM

Nice work, Love the eye & tone of shot overall. Pooch

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rosie42
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8 May 2006 - 2:06 PM

Cheers Alex and Pooch ...

Susie :o)

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U4eA
U4eA e2 Member 10475 forum postsU4eA vcard England
6 Jul 2006 - 8:36 PM

This is just superb..the toning, clarity, DOF, and presentation are particularly good. Easily your best image to date, despite some tough competition!

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rosie42
rosie42 e2 Member 10rosie42 vcard Australia
6 Jul 2006 - 10:36 PM

Thanks so much, Mark ...

Susie :o)

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POOCHIE
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19 Jul 2006 - 6:31 AM

Grat picture Rosie and your portfolio has got some lovely pictures in it, I,ll check it out properly later after work.

Pooch.

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rosie42
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19 Jul 2006 - 7:12 AM

Thank you for visiting, Pooch ...

Susie :o)

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willbrealey
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18 Aug 2007 - 12:20 AM

Striking and sexy... love the crop

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rosie42
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18 Aug 2007 - 1:42 AM

Cheers Will - good to see you ...

Susie :o)

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