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I have left quite a lot of space around this 1910 Avro Triplane to try to emphasise how fragile and small it seemed compared with some of the more modern aircraft at the show.
(The fact that there is limited zoom on the Fuji X10 may also have something to do with it!)

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix X10
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Focal Length:28.4mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.0
Aperture:f/3.2
Shutter Speed:1/850sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Flying the Flag
Username:salopian salopian
Uploaded:29 Oct 2012 - 4:40 PM
Tags:Flag, General, Triplane
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Jestertheclown
29 Oct 2012 - 9:25 PM

It says a lot for that camera when, even at this size, it's certainly sharp enough and there's plenty of detail, if you look hard enough!
I cropped this to increase the size of the aircraft and it's still acceptable at about half as big again. I imagine that you'd be able to get a reasonable crop from (a copy of) your original quite easily.

Bren.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10822 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2821 Constructive Critique Points
30 Oct 2012 - 3:34 PM

Very nice detail, and good exposure. I would suggest lowering it in the frame, and giving it more space in front as in the mod. Ive also brightened the plane a little, and darkened the sky.



regards



Willie

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iancrowson e2 Member 4211 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom128 Constructive Critique Points
30 Oct 2012 - 8:09 PM

Good picture. Interesting to see an image from a Fine Pix X10
Ian

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salopian e2 Member 2salopian vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 Nov 2012 - 5:46 PM

Thanks for the comments and advice - I think Willie's mod is just what it needed - how do you darken the sky and lighten the plane though?
Geoff

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