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Also shot in St Marys Stannington
Self portrait shot using natural light only!

Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:The doctors were my enemy
Username:saraxxx saraxxx
Uploaded:25 Nov 2009 - 10:19 AM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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Andrew_Hurley
25 Nov 2009 - 1:43 PM

It's a great idea and the composition is fine. I just feel the lighting and time of day needs to be changed. Taken at night with just a couple of spotlights will change the tone & mood completely. This lighting is more suitable for a bride and groom than a sinister portrait. Of course it depends on what mood/time of day you are trying to convey.

I hope this helps,

Andrew.

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edsephiroth
25 Nov 2009 - 1:47 PM

I was there on Friday! A great explore. If you're interested in seeing some of my pics, PM me for a link to my website! Smile

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saraxxx
saraxxx  5 United Kingdom
25 Nov 2009 - 1:52 PM

Thanks andrew yeah I do agree although I was a bit scared 2 stay til dark lol!!
In my experiences I believe u can b running from sum1 at any time of day but i do agree that it wld look betta at night!
Hi edsephiroth if I new how 2 pm u I would lol!
Did u enjoy it? I love shooting there! x

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G6DDS
G6DDS  5231 forum posts Scotland
25 Nov 2009 - 3:23 PM

Great work again sara

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jackson8472
25 Nov 2009 - 8:10 PM

awesome!!!but scary as hell!
i need to get to this place for some shots!!!
could i work with you sometime?
thanks
tony

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Geraint
Geraint  8715 forum posts Wales34 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2009 - 9:15 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is great. To me it's all a bit too bright though - if you brought down the exposure in RAW and/or converted to b&w and really pushed the contrast so that you have black shadows and bright (even clipped) highlights I think the menace would be enhanced and the textures in the stairs and walls would be brought out. The sunlight makes it look too 'nice' for me as it stands. You have a wonderful portfolio, and you're really getting the best out of this location - congratulations.
Geraint

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saraxxx
saraxxx  5 United Kingdom
27 Nov 2009 - 3:16 PM

Thanks Geraint yes the more I look at it the more I agree with u!
I think al have a go in photoshop n c what can do! I can take pics but neva seem to get the tones etc right! I dont think it helps that I edit on a laptop n cant c if its correct or not!
Thanks im off 2 photoshop! xxxx

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