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...the abandoned pier at Portencross harbour on the Ayrshire coast.

Camera:Sony Alpha 7
Lens:Carl Zeiss Distagon T* 2/25mm ZE
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Mind your step...
Username:Scottishlandscapes Scottishlandscapes
Uploaded:1 Feb 2014 - 10:17 AM
Tags:Ayrshire, Landscape / travel, Scotland
Votes:Voting Disabled

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andylea
andylea  637 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 10:23 AM

Looks a wonderful place to visit dougie love the comp a cracker nice one Wink
Andy

mikbee
mikbee Plus Member 8mikbee vcard Scotland8 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 12:30 PM

I think the hole makes a splendid picture frame to show of that rust Dougie.
Very considerate of them indeed !!
Mick.

woolybill1
woolybill1 Plus Member 8woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 12:57 PM

Best not used as a running track.
Love this composition with the offset gap between the ridges in the background: the pier is trying to make me look at the headland in the centre. Most interesting effect.
Regards
Bill

whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis Plus Member 277 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England93 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 1:06 PM

Wot...no paranoid HealthandSafety notices/cones/barricades/barriers/flashing lights/sirens???

Richsr
Richsr Plus Member 890 forum postsRichsr vcard England215 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 2:07 PM

Like your comp and crop for this Dougie
R.

barbarahirst
barbarahirst Plus Member 6barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 2:19 PM

great comp.
Wouldnt want to walk along there after the cooking wine....

mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8697 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1198 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 3:33 PM

Where are Elf 'n' Safety when you really need them???
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 1 Feb 2014 - 3:33 PM
RonnieAG
RonnieAG Plus Member 5148 forum postsRonnieAG vcard Scotland116 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 4:37 PM

I am wondering if there is anything to stop one progressing to the end of the pier given the defect in the decking? But it does make an interesting f/g and lead in to the view across the Firth.
As always when I am down in that direction the Arran tops are shrouded in cloud.
R.

saltireblue
saltireblue Site Moderator 54761 forum postssaltireblue vcard Norway27 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 6:28 PM

Long time since CalMac called there...

viscostatic
1 Feb 2014 - 7:14 PM

That hole could be part of a plot in 'The Vital Spark' Dougie.

Phil.

Scottishlandscapes
Scottishlandscapes Plus Member 1068 forum postsScottishlandscapes vcard Scotland35 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 7:31 PM

I'd change my name to Doogie.

Rende
Rende Plus Member 837 forum postsRende vcard Netherlands4 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 7:43 PM

Excellent composition Dougie, with a great sense of depth. Love that square hole.
Rende

pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly Plus Member 8342 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 8:28 PM

Love the letterbox presentation and the shades of blue in the sky and water, the lead in fits the theme perfectly Dougie

dudler
dudler Critique Team 11222 forum postsdudler vcard England498 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2014 - 2:32 PM

Looking very hard at this, I can't quite work it out. It feels like it needs a little extra something to make it into a spectacularly good shot. Everything is right, but it doesn't quite gel yet...

Somethign needs to be extreme. I wonder if a slighly lower viewpoint, foreshortening the pier, bringing the land acrooss the way closer to the pier end, and making it inot a more extreme panoramic would do it...

Alternatively, perhaps a mono treatment?

brownsilent
brownsilent Plus Member 8brownsilent vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Feb 2014 - 4:43 PM

Oh yes, you better mind your step - cause that water isn't warm. For sure!
Nice shades of blue all over.
Johanna

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