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...the abandoned pier at Portencross harbour on the Ayrshire coast.

Camera:Sony Alpha 7
Lens:Carl Zeiss Distagon T* 2/25mm ZE
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Mind your step...
Username:Scottishlandscapes Scottishlandscapes
Uploaded:1 Feb 2014 - 10:17 AM
Tags:Ayrshire, Landscape / travel, Scotland
Votes:Voting Disabled

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andylea
andylea  537 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 10:23 AM

Looks a wonderful place to visit dougie love the comp a cracker nice one Wink
Andy

mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 12:30 PM

I think the hole makes a splendid picture frame to show of that rust Dougie.
Very considerate of them indeed !!
Mick.

woolybill1
woolybill1 e2 Member 7woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 12:57 PM

Best not used as a running track.
Love this composition with the offset gap between the ridges in the background: the pier is trying to make me look at the headland in the centre. Most interesting effect.
Regards
Bill

whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis e2 Member 164 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England75 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 1:06 PM

Wot...no paranoid HealthandSafety notices/cones/barricades/barriers/flashing lights/sirens???

Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 2:07 PM

Like your comp and crop for this Dougie
R.

barbarahirst
barbarahirst e2 Member 6barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 2:19 PM

great comp.
Wouldnt want to walk along there after the cooking wine....

mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7435 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1024 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 3:33 PM

Where are Elf 'n' Safety when you really need them???
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 1 Feb 2014 - 3:33 PM
RonnieAG
RonnieAG e2 Member 4139 forum postsRonnieAG vcard Scotland112 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 4:37 PM

I am wondering if there is anything to stop one progressing to the end of the pier given the defect in the decking? But it does make an interesting f/g and lead in to the view across the Firth.
As always when I am down in that direction the Arran tops are shrouded in cloud.
R.

saltireblue
saltireblue Site Moderator 43917 forum postssaltireblue vcard Norway25 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 6:28 PM

Long time since CalMac called there...

viscostatic
1 Feb 2014 - 7:14 PM

That hole could be part of a plot in 'The Vital Spark' Dougie.

Phil.

Scottishlandscapes
Scottishlandscapes e2 Member 1068 forum postsScottishlandscapes vcard Scotland35 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 7:31 PM

I'd change my name to Doogie.

Rende
Rende e2 Member 737 forum postsRende vcard Netherlands4 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 7:43 PM

Excellent composition Dougie, with a great sense of depth. Love that square hole.
Rende

pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 8283 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2014 - 8:28 PM

Love the letterbox presentation and the shades of blue in the sky and water, the lead in fits the theme perfectly Dougie

dudler
dudler Critique Team 11103 forum postsdudler vcard England313 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2014 - 2:32 PM

Looking very hard at this, I can't quite work it out. It feels like it needs a little extra something to make it into a spectacularly good shot. Everything is right, but it doesn't quite gel yet...

Somethign needs to be extreme. I wonder if a slighly lower viewpoint, foreshortening the pier, bringing the land acrooss the way closer to the pier end, and making it inot a more extreme panoramic would do it...

Alternatively, perhaps a mono treatment?

brownsilent
brownsilent e2 Member 7brownsilent vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Feb 2014 - 4:43 PM

Oh yes, you better mind your step - cause that water isn't warm. For sure!
Nice shades of blue all over.
Johanna

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