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Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Sigma 17-50mm f/2.8 EX DC OS HSM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Apr 2013 - 2:08 PM
Focal Length:40mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:640
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:'Young Lady' col.
Username:SEMANON SEMANON
Uploaded:16 Apr 2013 - 11:15 AM
Tags:Flash / lighting, General, Portraits / people
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parob
parob e2 Member 4parob vcard France72 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2013 - 4:17 PM

I see what you are trying to do with this version. Adding colour certainly doesn't detract from a very photogenic subject. Seen from afar, this portrait works quite well. Getting closer to it is another matter. Again, my personal preference would be to crop just below the wisp of hair to counterbalance with the rest of the portrait. I still think the main focus ought to be on the eyes with as little distraction as possible (as you can see, the blue colour seems to overwhelm a bit at the LHS of the image). Regards again,
Paul

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