taking a dip

rontear (e2 Member)

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10 May 2009 - 5:06 PM

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Excellent image, superb pilots. I presume they compleated the task. Ron.

SFd

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16 May 2009 - 1:20 PM

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Hi Ed
Thankyou very much for the constructive and useful critique on my image. It's a credit to you and to ephotozine that this facility and access to and advice from a top class professional photojournalist is available.

Thanks Steve


Quote: Hi - this is a perfectly agreeable capture; though I would have liked to see someone standing on that slanting rock in the bottom left of the frame - if you were with a companion for example, get them to stand back to the camera, and towards the action - its bizarre how as in life, and as in pictures, when we see someone's attention turned to something, we want to find out what they're looking at. This could also have served as an anchor the shot, and I feel would help add a sense of perspective, and scale. You could have afforded to tighten up the shot a little also, without loosing a sense of location. Standing further back, and zooming closer (if you can) could have helped achieve this. Otherwise, if you know whats going to happen - then explore, and find alternative angles...though maybe you did this. As a photo its fine - but you're letting the action dictate the image -- you need to add a more obvious touch of your own to this shot for it to take on a more endearing feel. Cheers. Ed

SFd

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10 Jun 2009 - 8:31 AM

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Cheers Hendrick

Steve