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11/04/2010 - 9:18 PM
50's Girl
It is a good portrait but just feel it needs a hairlight or background spot to make the image pop for me. I like the crop and off centre so well doneNeal
22/06/2009 - 10:56 PM
Little Miss Muffet
firstly well done for trying this - very difficult to do self portraits never mind juming up onto a gate too!! I would have prefered a better pose perhaps something more natural like leaning against a gate post etc. Regarding the light - yes you can see the flasg was used and the overal exposure looks fine - I would have underexposed the ambient slightly though perhaps by 1- 1.5 stops, zoomed the flash slightly to create a vignette and the flash would expose to give a more dynamic image, hope this helps abit?Neal
17/12/2008 - 7:58 PM
Emma Lea
That works a treat Rob, nothing wrong with a bit of grain. I like it as is but you could also have used the reflector to bounce some light back onto Emma Leas legs. What ISO were you at? well done
Neal
12/11/2008 - 3:09 PM
Rush
Nice crop and light although just to improve a tad more would be a hairlight or a spot on the background to improve the graduation. Top shot though welldoneNeal
14/05/2008 - 1:12 PM
If you go down to the woods today
much better off cam - what you could try next time too put light almost 45 degrees to model and -1>-2 the exp on the background but get the model to look off towards the light - would really give a dramatic light - but would show shadows!!! I like shadows though.This works well here though
Neal
13/05/2008 - 9:37 AM
Jazz singer 6
I like the mood Martin - perhaps it would really pop in black n white? I like that you have some light spill on the background but the blue too strong - can you do a mono variant?Neal
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