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the fruit,beauty of nature.by-shahidullah.
critique-composition,focus and britness.
| Brand: | Canon |
| Camera: | Canon PowerShot SX40 HS |
| Lens: | 4.3 - 150.5 mm (35 mm equivalent: 24.0 - 840.5 mm) |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Date Taken: | 22 Mar 2012 - 12:10 AM |
| Focal Length: | 150.5mm |
| Lens Max Aperture: | f/5.8 |
| Aperture: | f/5.8 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/320sec |
| Exposure Comp: | +1/3 |
| ISO: | 400 |
| Metering Mode: | Evaluative |
| Flash: | Off, Did not fire |
| Title: | general |
| Username: | 
shydallah |
| Uploaded: | 27 Mar 2012 - 11:51 AM |
| Tags: | General |
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| Modifications Welcome (Upload a Modification) |
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This is lovely, really nicely composed and with nice, natural, soft colours. I think it deserves a little effort with presentation, hence my modification.
This is nicely composed, with the berry around the intersection of thirds; but, like Nick, I'd prefer to see the whole cluster of leaves. It just feels like there's a little bit missing without the tops of them.
It looks like the light is coming straight down, which isn't ideal, and you seem to be photographing the shaded side of the berry. That has given a slightly flat-looking image and the extra contrast of Lynne's mod is a big help. Look around to find the angle from which the light is best
The natural background looks good here; another option is to use a piece of black card to get a studio-like effect. You'll probably need a friend to hold it in plac.e
Dave.
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