Sarah,

Just a couple of points for me;

The 1st and most noticeable is the crop at the top, should have tried to keep the point.

2nd at this is just a personal thing, its a little too busy, your model looks confident and happy to pose, and the railings leading to the church have great perpective, but with both in the picture, I cant decide on where I should be looking.

I know you cant change the layout of a location, if this didnt have the fence it would be great with point 1 sorted too

Look forward to seeing more of your work.

Great shot, love the colour tones, do me a favour and try rotating the original 0.5 / 0.75 / 1 degree clockwise to me its just out and by god its bugging me lol